been told I needed to word my stuff better ,and increase complexity of my bars , and also someone suggested loosing the '' '' around stuff ... so done some what I thought were nice bars and waited for someone dope to drop ..so OG posted an open and I dropped them as a reply . just want some folks to comment here on wether they think I am now going in the right direction.
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...808§ion=tb
thx n peace .