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Originally Posted by Jason
you also gotta take into consideration that he went 32 lines rhyming the same words.
granted, thats not an excuse to do things incorrectly .. but im a big picture kinda guy .. i dont sit there and get hung up on every single thing rhyming flawlessly .. its more appreciating the verse as a total package sometimes .. godly feud / probable is a not a great multi but when i read it i instantly know that they match and flow together.. its all in the way its said
if you got a preschooler to rhyme: cat, hat, bat, car .. you would see that "car" doesnt rhyme
just like if you got a preschooler to rhyme "racist endeavours" and "praying together" they would not rhyme
but ... in a text battle ... car and cat dont rhyme
but in a text battle .. praying together and racist endeavours do rhyme cus of the way the writing is
its contextual
not arguing with your overall point though
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I'd be the same, but with that one multi (which this isn't about, I don't mean to JUST take shots at Phrox. Seems everyone agrees about ReeF haha), with that multi I had to stop and make sure it was supposed to rhyme with the first one. I wasn't trying to pick stuff out but straight away I had to read over some stuff again to find what I was supposed to be rhyming with. For example, probable flows off like one word. It's quite a quickly said word. When you hit godly feud, it's MUCH slower and has the glottal stop in the middle (is it still called glottal when it's actually a space?). Straight away the flow got fucked up from that to me and I would have to adjust how I'd go about reading from then on.
How the fuck does cat rhyme with car in preschool?