Originally Posted by Row

i thought that the wp was so bad but i saw no one point it out.. so i kinda kept it to myself tbh. it looked like no one cared

And yet now you're a mod who can see everyone's votes? What's to say you won't see that everyone voted one way, keep your thoughts to yourself and do what everyone else did again?

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Originally Posted by Jason

lol yeah well i guess your accent will play a role in something like this
the setup and style is critical tho man .. Phroxen is amazing at writing in that style.. he writes it in such a way that the words bounce off each other properly
the way you did it in that bar is more .. rigid .. i dunno how to explain it .. its not the same quality of writing so its not gunna flow as well as his did

that said .. i wouldnt consider yours improper or criticize the verse for that multi .. but this type of writing is something he excels at so its even "less improper' when he does it .. it has nothing to do with his name .. Phroxen isnt even a big name (?) he kinda just appeared outta nowhere and dropped a few battles lol

your best multies in that bar are actually "praying together and racist endeavours" and they dont rhyme at all

So I don't rhyme at all....


Yet you haven't once mentioned PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD.


Maybe you will reply "I didn't read that" but that's EXACTLY what I'm talking about. Aye, it's easy to say "EtH man your shit's not rhyming" but in the first post of the thread there is a MUCH worse attempt at a rhyme from a top name on the site and no one seems to give a fuck.

Originally Posted by Row

i thought that the wp was so bad but i saw no one point it out.. so i kinda kept it to myself tbh. it looked like no one cared

And yet now you're a mod who can see everyone's votes? What's to say you won't see that everyone voted one way, keep your thoughts to yourself and do what everyone else did again?

---------- Post added at 10:53 AM ---------- Previous post was at 10:51 AM ----------

Originally Posted by Jason

lol yeah well i guess your accent will play a role in something like this
the setup and style is critical tho man .. Phroxen is amazing at writing in that style.. he writes it in such a way that the words bounce off each other properly
the way you did it in that bar is more .. rigid .. i dunno how to explain it .. its not the same quality of writing so its not gunna flow as well as his did

that said .. i wouldnt consider yours improper or criticize the verse for that multi .. but this type of writing is something he excels at so its even "less improper' when he does it .. it has nothing to do with his name .. Phroxen isnt even a big name (?) he kinda just appeared outta nowhere and dropped a few battles lol

your best multies in that bar are actually "praying together and racist endeavours" and they dont rhyme at all

So I don't rhyme at all....


Yet you haven't once mentioned PROBABLE / GODLY FEUD.


Maybe you will reply "I didn't read that" but that's EXACTLY what I'm talking about. Aye, it's easy to say "EtH man your shit's not rhyming" but in the first post of the thread there is a MUCH worse attempt at a rhyme from a top name on the site and no one seems to give a fuck.