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Bruh @Lockhart this was fucking dope as fuck. No complaints here. The story never steered off and the complexity was just smarts with nice wording and the scheme was on point.

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*Earth's Revenge.

"I have yet to understand why the people still run to me for I am the Earth*turning*to the evil that's underneath.*
I release my anger showing you the steam from the running creeks with vitriolic distaste for mistreatment of shrubs and trees."


This was bound to happen, you've put a hole in my back.
Penetrating my surface with drills, opening cracks.
For this alone, prepare to turn to smoke and to ash*
You failed in your mission to protect me, you've broken the pact.*
You kept me clean for centuries, I had hope in the past
That you would keep your promise to me, but what you've shown is a rat's
Thinking pattern is no different matter from the soul of a human.
You were meant to share in the wealth, you weren't supposed to consume it.
Pipelines? My, what's next from you people?
You've polluted my breath, to me, the stench is just fequal.
Sheer brilliance man. This not getting any feed man... I'm back and active and gonna try and revive a place that retains such golden scripts that needs to stop being slept on bruh. Your wording was what made this ever more special.
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Bruh @Lockhart this was fucking dope as fuck. No complaints here. The story never steered off and the complexity was just smarts with nice wording and the scheme was on point.

Quote:
*Earth's Revenge.

"I have yet to understand why the people still run to me for I am the Earth*turning*to the evil that's underneath.*
I release my anger showing you the steam from the running creeks with vitriolic distaste for mistreatment of shrubs and trees."


This was bound to happen, you've put a hole in my back.
Penetrating my surface with drills, opening cracks.
For this alone, prepare to turn to smoke and to ash*
You failed in your mission to protect me, you've broken the pact.*
You kept me clean for centuries, I had hope in the past
That you would keep your promise to me, but what you've shown is a rat's
Thinking pattern is no different matter from the soul of a human.
You were meant to share in the wealth, you weren't supposed to consume it.
Pipelines? My, what's next from you people?
You've polluted my breath, to me, the stench is just fequal.
Sheer brilliance man. This not getting any feed man... I'm back and active and gonna try and revive a place that retains such golden scripts that needs to stop being slept on bruh. Your wording was what made this ever more special.
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