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Unread 12-05-2014, 04:40 PM
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The thing that stands out the most is how random the punches seem.is it just me or can anyone tell me who obeys opponent is based off of his bars?....concepts itself were decent to a few good ones... but thats the main issue with your verse... couldve been thrown at anyone....
Isn't that a good thing that I can spin bars without having to use name flips? Because if I used more name flips, it'd be ''Too many name flips tbh.''
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Unread 12-05-2014, 04:40 PM   #8
 
Obey
Estimated Skill in Text: 6.53/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.53/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.53/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.53/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.53/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.53/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.98/10 stars
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Originally Posted by ILLoKWENT View Post
The thing that stands out the most is how random the punches seem.is it just me or can anyone tell me who obeys opponent is based off of his bars?....concepts itself were decent to a few good ones... but thats the main issue with your verse... couldve been thrown at anyone....
Isn't that a good thing that I can spin bars without having to use name flips? Because if I used more name flips, it'd be ''Too many name flips tbh.''
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