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**BIG DICE** · #55 08-22-2014, 06:01 PM

Week 2 Vote @X-Calibur

EMCEE A (NICHOLAS) = 3: Emcee A had a bit of a rhyming scheme going on but was missing the elements needed to compete in this battle. His punchlines barely had an impact in my honest opinion and the wordplay was okay but needs work like all of his verse.
EMCEE B (KILOS) = 5: Emcee B had a decent flow and included the main elements of what a rap battle is made up of in regards to punchlines, wordplay and multies which I really enjoyed reading and made me laugh. And also both used a few metaphors which is always good to see and helps improve their rhyme scheme and builds their skill as well but I definitely believe Emcee B was better on all levels in this one.

That’s my vote, my honest fair vote. Peace Out BIG DICE.

**BIG DICE** · 08-22-2014, 06:01 PM

Week 2 Vote @X-Calibur

EMCEE A (NICHOLAS) = 3: Emcee A had a bit of a rhyming scheme going on but was missing the elements needed to compete in this battle. His punchlines barely had an impact in my honest opinion and the wordplay was okay but needs work like all of his verse.
EMCEE B (KILOS) = 5: Emcee B had a decent flow and included the main elements of what a rap battle is made up of in regards to punchlines, wordplay and multies which I really enjoyed reading and made me laugh. And also both used a few metaphors which is always good to see and helps improve their rhyme scheme and builds their skill as well but I definitely believe Emcee B was better on all levels in this one.

That’s my vote, my honest fair vote. Peace Out BIG DICE.

08-22-2014, 06:01 PM	#55
BIG DICE Ranked Audio Record 8 Won / 14 Lost Ranked Text Record 171 Won / 199 Lost Join Date: Aug 2006 Voted: 165 audio / 1147 text Posts: 296 Mentioned: 11 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s)	Week 2 Vote @X-Calibur EMCEE A (NICHOLAS) = 3: Emcee A had a bit of a rhyming scheme going on but was missing the elements needed to compete in this battle. His punchlines barely had an impact in my honest opinion and the wordplay was okay but needs work like all of his verse. EMCEE B (KILOS) = 5: Emcee B had a decent flow and included the main elements of what a rap battle is made up of in regards to punchlines, wordplay and multies which I really enjoyed reading and made me laugh. And also both used a few metaphors which is always good to see and helps improve their rhyme scheme and builds their skill as well but I definitely believe Emcee B was better on all levels in this one. That’s my vote, my honest fair vote. Peace Out BIG DICE.
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