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Unread 08-11-2014, 06:08 PM
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EMCEE A = 3

EMCEE B = 5

out of the 5 categories listed, I feel Emcee B had each one in his verse. the way he structured every multi, was a little extreme and made me feel like I was stuttering through the verse. besides that, he had all punches through his verse and didn't feel like they were forced.

EMCEE A = had a good flow, but lacked all the key elements. had a few ending rhymes, might sound good on an audio track, but not for a text battle. the whole verse was hard to read due to no bars or commas, which made the multis get lost in the translation. gave him a 3 for effort. B is the winner of this battle.

this is how I voted and think it would be a fair vote as well.
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Unread 08-11-2014, 06:08 PM   #34
 
RAW DAWG RAW DAWG is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row!
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Estimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.78/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.78/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.78/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.78/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.78/10 stars
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22 Won / 10 Lost
 
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EMCEE A = 3

EMCEE B = 5

out of the 5 categories listed, I feel Emcee B had each one in his verse. the way he structured every multi, was a little extreme and made me feel like I was stuttering through the verse. besides that, he had all punches through his verse and didn't feel like they were forced.

EMCEE A = had a good flow, but lacked all the key elements. had a few ending rhymes, might sound good on an audio track, but not for a text battle. the whole verse was hard to read due to no bars or commas, which made the multis get lost in the translation. gave him a 3 for effort. B is the winner of this battle.

this is how I voted and think it would be a fair vote as well.
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