Writer 3
your vocab was on point, and the way you described everything that was going on helped me picture it so ya imagery was nice too, you maintained a good flow, and the rhyming was good, I didnt see anything wrong with your drop, good shit
writer 1
You also had a good flow, and the rhyming was okay, you also did describe what was going on around you, however it wasn't as vivid as your opponents imagery, other than that, I liked your story telling. Good ish
writer 5
Yo, dope topical, your flow was nice as hell, imagery was there too, i like how you described the dudes hair "thinking hes capone" lol, rhyming wasn't really that smooth to me, but you did your thing.
Winner: Writer 3.
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