Writer 10: The story was decent....however it did not make any sense with the picture at hand. Maybe if it was a topical about lil wayne. The flow was pretty decent at least and so was your lil wayne story. Just seemed like you were messing around here. Next time use the picture for your story line
Writer 3: Very smoooth w/ the wording and multis. The whole piece was terrific in my opinion. Your story line matched exactly w/ the picture. Lots of nice imagery in there. One of the best topicals I've read this tournament hands down.
MVGT: Writer 3 A clear and better understanding of how to write and construct a terrific topical
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