Writer 6: I was really digging the story line and imagery of your topical. Had a nice smooth flow as well because of the multis. I liked the way that everything connected and that your story had a point to it. Solid topical here.
Writer 14: It was fairly smooth because of the multis. However, I felt you focused more on the thoughts of the bear and didn't really have much of a story line. You needed to have more of a story line to follow so that everything could connect
Overall: MVGT Writer 6. They had a smoother and overall better story and use of their topical
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