Writer 10:
This piece had me rolling. Even though it was comical, it did carry a message. It was actually a really dope piece and came original. Flow was good, sacrificed vocab for the Weezy effect but the imagery was cool. Contradicted itself in typical Weezy fashion, very original idea.
Writer 3:
I fucked with this piece a lot. The imagery, the story, it was all really good. The two pieces were really close, your ending was somewhat predictable, but it was appropriate. The message was really strong and conveyed a sad truth.
Overall both pieces I felt were even, and it really came down to my personal preference.
MVGT: Writer 3
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