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Unread 07-06-2014, 09:33 AM
Hubert Cumberdale
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Runaway

A runaway, cast out, a social pariah
Staying solo in ire with no one desired
Alone and I’m tired, leave my people behind
No demons in sight as I’m leaving my life
Unleashed as a captive, now I shed the weight
He displayed his strongarm against my face
Just venomous eyes when I looked around
They tried to hold me back and then put me down
Controlled by force to start acting right
The bait was displayed and I had to bite
I’m gone, free to be and free to live
Strolling through an autumn flora of leaves and twigs
Meeting a friend, both walking concurrent
A companion for me is not a common occurrence
He follows, two runaways that won’t make amends
I gain a sense that this this will be a new faithful friend
His owners abused him, such a similar story
His sad eyes a reflection and I’m thinking he knows me
He’s a dog, a mutt which I want to love
We’ve rejected the lives which they offered us
We’ll care for each other to a new extent
Just me, walking, with my human friend

Vs

Writer 4

Looking ahead in silence, blackness all around, lite glimpse of helio rays beaming down, then the absence of light hits, through the grounded clouds, revealing silhouettes drifting towards guidance,as tapered foot steps echo off the ground, pitter pats of my best friend drift me to where life is, with a driven sense thats heightened,to lead me out, he runs ahead to evaluate the scene before I get abound!! I arise to a level of clearness, fearless to every sound, but as we're halfway in, I wonder are we getting out?? trees bleed the morning dew, an off condensation unique seeds are spawning through, flowers I've never seen are even blossoming too!! Clawing a top the soil to clean air that I'm letting seep, I notice all this to the sounds of my feet, I know this is sounding so oblique but I stay grounded off the beat that I beat , I don't stray from the path of my destination coz what u don't know versus what you do can be more devastating. Ive felt death with a similar touch but death battling reality I don't fear so much, as life when its unknown, so my friend and me seem to carry on. We are reaching the end of the road, I look back and the future doesn't look so bright but with him here I get the feeling that everything will be just fine..
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Runaway

A runaway, cast out, a social pariah
Staying solo in ire with no one desired
Alone and I’m tired, leave my people behind
No demons in sight as I’m leaving my life
Unleashed as a captive, now I shed the weight
He displayed his strongarm against my face
Just venomous eyes when I looked around
They tried to hold me back and then put me down
Controlled by force to start acting right
The bait was displayed and I had to bite
I’m gone, free to be and free to live
Strolling through an autumn flora of leaves and twigs
Meeting a friend, both walking concurrent
A companion for me is not a common occurrence
He follows, two runaways that won’t make amends
I gain a sense that this this will be a new faithful friend
His owners abused him, such a similar story
His sad eyes a reflection and I’m thinking he knows me
He’s a dog, a mutt which I want to love
We’ve rejected the lives which they offered us
We’ll care for each other to a new extent
Just me, walking, with my human friend

Vs

Writer 4

Looking ahead in silence, blackness all around, lite glimpse of helio rays beaming down, then the absence of light hits, through the grounded clouds, revealing silhouettes drifting towards guidance,as tapered foot steps echo off the ground, pitter pats of my best friend drift me to where life is, with a driven sense thats heightened,to lead me out, he runs ahead to evaluate the scene before I get abound!! I arise to a level of clearness, fearless to every sound, but as we're halfway in, I wonder are we getting out?? trees bleed the morning dew, an off condensation unique seeds are spawning through, flowers I've never seen are even blossoming too!! Clawing a top the soil to clean air that I'm letting seep, I notice all this to the sounds of my feet, I know this is sounding so oblique but I stay grounded off the beat that I beat , I don't stray from the path of my destination coz what u don't know versus what you do can be more devastating. Ive felt death with a similar touch but death battling reality I don't fear so much, as life when its unknown, so my friend and me seem to carry on. We are reaching the end of the road, I look back and the future doesn't look so bright but with him here I get the feeling that everything will be just fine..