With my limited knowledge of topicals, I'll try to vote on this to the best of my abilities.

I'll start my critique with Writer 15. Focusing on your story, I thought it was superb. Honestly, this was one of the best topicals I've read. The story was lucid, entertaining and extremely creative. The details gave a clear/concise picture of what was happening , and I loved how the verse was split up into two parts, making it original. Looking on the technical aspects, the verses flowed effortlessly. I noticed most verses, whether topical or text, have an occasional hiccup in the flow. However, I was able to read this entire verse without stopping once. I didn't see any problems with your wording either. Great Verse.

Writer 18. I enjoyed this verse. You're story was well put together, however, it wasn't as creative, compared to writer 15. I felt religion was the obvious approach. Nevertheless, the verse still captured my attention until the very end. From a technical aspect, the verse flowed smooth but there was some questionable wording in certain spots. the Imagery wasn't bad, but it wasn't as strong as verse 15. Overall, writer 15 just made more of an impact in this battle.

FVGHNOH8- Writer 15

With my limited knowledge of topicals, I'll try to vote on this to the best of my abilities.

I'll start my critique with Writer 15. Focusing on your story, I thought it was superb. Honestly, this was one of the best topicals I've read. The story was lucid, entertaining and extremely creative. The details gave a clear/concise picture of what was happening , and I loved how the verse was split up into two parts, making it original. Looking on the technical aspects, the verses flowed effortlessly. I noticed most verses, whether topical or text, have an occasional hiccup in the flow. However, I was able to read this entire verse without stopping once. I didn't see any problems with your wording either. Great Verse.

Writer 18. I enjoyed this verse. You're story was well put together, however, it wasn't as creative, compared to writer 15. I felt religion was the obvious approach. Nevertheless, the verse still captured my attention until the very end. From a technical aspect, the verse flowed smooth but there was some questionable wording in certain spots. the Imagery wasn't bad, but it wasn't as strong as verse 15. Overall, writer 15 just made more of an impact in this battle.

FVGHNOH8- Writer 15