Writer 2
I thought the verse was nice. You took the quote literally and did your thing with it using Van Gogh as the character, which was a nice approach to take as this could have made it difficult. I actually thought the rhyming was a little basic in places, making the flow a little sort of slow paced. But overall a solid first round verse
Writer 31
You took a completely different approach to the topic. I like how you included all the things that had to come together to get to the ending. It was just a little basic. It seemed more cypher than topical. Getting on point with the topic is the main thing you need to do in a topical battle - which you did well, so there's a good basis to work from. It just seemed like whoever writer 2 is, they are a little more experienced in topicals and a little more well rounded
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