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**Dysfunctional** · #6 06-24-2014, 12:12 AM

@Wonderbred will do Writer 13 You're story was executed really well honestly but the flow threw everything off it made me reread alot to get the flow back. Other then that really like the story though.
Writer 20: The flow was alot better then Writer 13 but like Dave said no mystery was there cuz you gave away who it was near the beginning. The story was decent but way more creative then Writer 13.
Overall this was a lot closer then most of the other bouts. but one must come victorious My vote still goes to : Writer 20

**Dysfunctional** · 06-24-2014, 12:12 AM

@Wonderbred will do Writer 13 You're story was executed really well honestly but the flow threw everything off it made me reread alot to get the flow back. Other then that really like the story though.
Writer 20: The flow was alot better then Writer 13 but like Dave said no mystery was there cuz you gave away who it was near the beginning. The story was decent but way more creative then Writer 13.
Overall this was a lot closer then most of the other bouts. but one must come victorious My vote still goes to : Writer 20