[Dysfunctional]

So this was a pretty easy decision IMO Mad Respects to both for posting though.
Writer 2: This was well done the ending was beautiful. The beginning had me confused as to why it was there though it seemed random (even if the end connected to it it's still an odd start and transition to the next part) Other then that Great Topical.
Writer 31: The structure threw me off immediately i thought i was reading a battle verse. The vocabulary threw me off as well it's kinda bad to use that stuff in a Topical ( I assume this is your first topical so i'm giving constructive criticism) The story was choppy to me and the ending seemed a bit predictable.
Props to both for posting but MVGT: Writer 2

[Dysfunctional]

So this was a pretty easy decision IMO Mad Respects to both for posting though.
Writer 2: This was well done the ending was beautiful. The beginning had me confused as to why it was there though it seemed random (even if the end connected to it it's still an odd start and transition to the next part) Other then that Great Topical.
Writer 31: The structure threw me off immediately i thought i was reading a battle verse. The vocabulary threw me off as well it's kinda bad to use that stuff in a Topical ( I assume this is your first topical so i'm giving constructive criticism) The story was choppy to me and the ending seemed a bit predictable.
Props to both for posting but MVGT: Writer 2