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**Dysfunctional** · #4 06-23-2014, 11:48 PM

Now writer 9 your topical (no offense) seemed like something Dr. Seuss would write IMO. The story moved a little bit too quick for me honestly and the switching back between characters threw me off. I like the idea and some of the rhyming was decent but could've been WAY better with the idea you had.
Writer 24: I liked alot about this one although the idea wasn't as creative as Writer 9 IMO. The story was a little bit easier to follow and flowed alot better. Nothing else to say nice job.

Good topicals by both but MVGT: Writer 24

**Dysfunctional** · 06-23-2014, 11:48 PM

Now writer 9 your topical (no offense) seemed like something Dr. Seuss would write IMO. The story moved a little bit too quick for me honestly and the switching back between characters threw me off. I like the idea and some of the rhyming was decent but could've been WAY better with the idea you had.
Writer 24: I liked alot about this one although the idea wasn't as creative as Writer 9 IMO. The story was a little bit easier to follow and flowed alot better. Nothing else to say nice job.

Good topicals by both but MVGT: Writer 24