I got permission from Rule to vote on this so here we go.
1st Topical: I really liked the story here and creative i thought. The flow was there the vocab was there everything was there to make this a good topical. I agree with I believe Rule said it? it had a toy story esque feel to it but I actually liked that. Through just letters back and forth you showed the story progression really well. Overall this was a really damn good topical.
2nd Topical: The flow was a bit iffy in a couple lines other then that the flow was really good. I think it was the third stanza flowed fucking beautifully. The story was not vague but a little to mysterious for me. It took me a little bit to figure out what the story was. But when i figured it out I was like wow that was good. Also that last line? Fucking Brilliant. Overall another really damn good topical.
Decision: I believe structure and things do matter in topicals. But the most important thing I believe is how well the story resonates to people and the creativity and uniqueness put into it. For those reasons MVGT Topical #1
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