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Unread 06-20-2014, 05:37 PM
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Both really great. I liked the heroine heroin idea thought it was great but it took a little longer to get to then the first one. I think the first story with the teddy bear was more affective as it goes through a child/adult transition. There weren't as much multis but the actual content compensated for that I think. Personal opinion is they were both really good but i think the story told in the first painted a better picture in my head and I feel thats the deciding factor because if you can get your target audience to relate then you have done your job. Really good read though both did a great job.
Unread 06-20-2014, 05:37 PM   #14
 
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12 Won / 6 Lost
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221 Won / 50 Lost
 
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Both really great. I liked the heroine heroin idea thought it was great but it took a little longer to get to then the first one. I think the first story with the teddy bear was more affective as it goes through a child/adult transition. There weren't as much multis but the actual content compensated for that I think. Personal opinion is they were both really good but i think the story told in the first painted a better picture in my head and I feel thats the deciding factor because if you can get your target audience to relate then you have done your job. Really good read though both did a great job.
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