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Originally Posted by Skizzo
The problem is you're missing commas Vit. Grammatically speaking..
"Our entire team is made up of Wheel, Brake and Tire Crews."
^ That is a correctly formed sentence. No matter which way you look at it. Now... I don't want to be on some white knight shit, but you're wrong pimp. Sorry.
Other than that though.. It's your opinion, I can't say whether it's hot or not, THAT is opinion but when it's a question of correct sentence grammar or not, well... we can measure that right? that's actual FACT. So yeah, you're wrong there. lol
Anyways... Been a while huh PulSe. You still being a bitch, as always I see lol. What's new around here though?
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Not that I'm in this, but I'd like to input my opinion:
Wordplay works with multiple meanings, not just one.
While "Our entire team is made up of Wheel, brake and Tire crews" does work (Even though it is completely irrelevant to fuck all, and just looks fucking retarded. I mean, who the fuck says "Yeaaa shun ma squad fulla mechanics"?
It's double meaning doesn't work in the slightest:
"Our entire team is made up of we'll break entire crews"
That doesn't work at all. Not to mention "and tire" and "entire" also is broken as fuck. The bar is hella ill-structured in multiple ways.