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Forgive the children @DooX

You could work on following the cadence of the beat...I understand the lyrics was supposed to be uplifting and shit, but people really don't want to hear stuff like that (the ones that want to hear rap and hip hop anyways)Towards the beginning you was really off beat...The lyrics could be a little better. Also you could of found a beat this nice if not better from youtube and used a converter site to download the beat as an Audio file...instead of paying $30 that comes with a hook on it. You got ripped off, Specially if you're not trying to sell this track to make money. By the way, there is no "Frank" they're just fucking with you.

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Forgive the children @DooX

You could work on following the cadence of the beat...I understand the lyrics was supposed to be uplifting and shit, but people really don't want to hear stuff like that (the ones that want to hear rap and hip hop anyways)Towards the beginning you was really off beat...The lyrics could be a little better. Also you could of found a beat this nice if not better from youtube and used a converter site to download the beat as an Audio file...instead of paying $30 that comes with a hook on it. You got ripped off, Specially if you're not trying to sell this track to make money. By the way, there is no "Frank" they're just fucking with you.