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#33 03-15-2014, 11:17 PM

@Phenomonon In one of your battles I noticed you used the multi "THINK OF YA STINK ASS" and one of your other multi sets GANG CUZ YA STRAIGHT TRASH. It just sounds a bit forced in my opinion. Almost like you're trying too hard to get the multis to match up. The Phe of last year wasn't having this bar. He also wasn't having bad setup problems like your "excelled your stuff" like BAD BREAK UPS! The other meaning to that of course is "ex selled your stuff" which doesn't make sense grammatically at all.

03-15-2014, 11:17 PM

@Phenomonon In one of your battles I noticed you used the multi "THINK OF YA STINK ASS" and one of your other multi sets GANG CUZ YA STRAIGHT TRASH. It just sounds a bit forced in my opinion. Almost like you're trying too hard to get the multis to match up. The Phe of last year wasn't having this bar. He also wasn't having bad setup problems like your "excelled your stuff" like BAD BREAK UPS! The other meaning to that of course is "ex selled your stuff" which doesn't make sense grammatically at all.

03-15-2014, 11:17 PM	#33
Lockhart Guest Voted: 0 audio / 0 text Posts: n/a Mentioned: Post(s) Tagged: Thread(s)	@Phenomonon In one of your battles I noticed you used the multi "THINK OF YA STINK ASS" and one of your other multi sets GANG CUZ YA STRAIGHT TRASH. It just sounds a bit forced in my opinion. Almost like you're trying too hard to get the multis to match up. The Phe of last year wasn't having this bar. He also wasn't having bad setup problems like your "excelled your stuff" like BAD BREAK UPS! The other meaning to that of course is "ex selled your stuff" which doesn't make sense grammatically at all.