Ok Six here is ya break down my dude all honest feed ..
Stand Out Barz of Your Verse:
See if our "family's fued" i "double dare" you to HANDLE the THREAT~im a stand like a man im a MAN of RESPECT~i might "win lose or draw"different CALLIBER TEKS~but "press your luck" and your in "jeopardy" like ALEX TREBEK
iLL concept I see where you were going w/ it I honestly think it could have been executed better had you cut out some of the fillers out .. or prehaps after this bar should have brought the "game show" names back into a tying bar but overall it was a strong opener
that was cool but i could DO BETTER~so this next scheme is going out to WHOEVER~thinking they ahead of the kid ill "snapback your wig" then proceed to "cap it off" for the "START of a NEW ERA"
This was hot .. a very used concept but you brought a new fresh approach on it .. short and to the point very solid bar and landed nicely
he the type thatll HIDE when its BEEF~even wit a "ghost writer/ryder" he aint RIDING wit HEAT~matter fact scratch that this battle is like "The Ring" cuz after "watching this video" he'll DIE in a WEEK
decent bar .. the ryder/riding is iffy w/ me tbh SIXX when you actually hear you saying it but the ring punch was good .. I actually like that movie
i aint "clowning around" tell this BOZO STOP~i'll give him a "free round" thats a PROMO SHOT~if he really want war ill be at his front door gripping "two metal arms" like ROBOCOP
By far my favorite bar in the entire verse .. I liked the entire concept great bar
~in a "flash of light" like a PHOTO OP~the "desert eagle a fly" and make this DO-DO DROP (the do-do is a extinct bird)~so this "sucker m.c" better "Run top speed" and never "walk this way like JO JOs POPS
I rock w/ this bar as well but like ya opener it had alot of hidden concepts that could be looked at as filler but over all it was solid
Now SIXX ya video quality, presence, clarity etc etc were all on point in this battle nobody can take that away from you but what I think lacked in ya barz was real punchez ie lack there of .. I didn't feel the punching power but you had a lot of jabs but no haymakers ..
This verse would have beat Brown cause he suck but you got to step it up I always fetl you should battle live but you better than this I have seen better than this but again you HOF for a reason as well as a GC bring them bombs next battle
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