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Unread 02-25-2014, 11:35 AM
Babylon Babylon is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row!
Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 4,132
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 stars
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63 Won / 15 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.84/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.84/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.84/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.84/10 stars
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66 Won / 21 Lost
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2 Won / 0 Lost
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Dono - Flow sounds forced & odd, seems like every time you try to do faster flows it comes off as such. You have a nasally delivery, so the faster stuff comes off as odd. That, and your rhyming was especially basic in this one (starin'/apparant/wearin/sharin. cute/loose/moves/do games/gaze/change) which significantly contributed to the formulaic aspect of your verse.

Fame - Flow was nice, rhyming was a bit above average with only a few basic areas. Your deliver was on point, too.

Muggz - Rhyming was the best out of the three, so naturally the flow was also good. Delivery was there, and your cadence was confident.

Overall - I wish everyone's verses were a bit longer, as Fame & Muggz only had a few bars in theirs, while Dono went a bit faster so he had more content. The beat was nice, and the hook was great as most Fame hooks are. I don't necessarily bump this type of track often, but this one was executed nicely.
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Unread 02-25-2014, 11:35 AM   #3
 
Babylon Babylon is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row!
Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.88/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
63 Won / 15 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.88/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.84/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.84/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.84/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.84/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
66 Won / 21 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
2 Won / 0 Lost
 
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Dono - Flow sounds forced & odd, seems like every time you try to do faster flows it comes off as such. You have a nasally delivery, so the faster stuff comes off as odd. That, and your rhyming was especially basic in this one (starin'/apparant/wearin/sharin. cute/loose/moves/do games/gaze/change) which significantly contributed to the formulaic aspect of your verse.

Fame - Flow was nice, rhyming was a bit above average with only a few basic areas. Your deliver was on point, too.

Muggz - Rhyming was the best out of the three, so naturally the flow was also good. Delivery was there, and your cadence was confident.

Overall - I wish everyone's verses were a bit longer, as Fame & Muggz only had a few bars in theirs, while Dono went a bit faster so he had more content. The beat was nice, and the hook was great as most Fame hooks are. I don't necessarily bump this type of track often, but this one was executed nicely.
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