I'm gettin' mad, cus' none of you bitches half as nice,
so if you on a track, talkin' shit like you rappin tight,
imma kill ya soul so you could lay up in a casket twice,
the mastermind, smashin' up on ya average lines,
the savage kind, I'll smack a guy to the afterlife.
I'm classified as that spastic guy with a graphic mind;
Cus' I'm that bar killer, I carve scripture with arced scissors, A heart ripper, the jarred mixture of hard liquors, my bars enter a dark picture, I'm far sicker than a sars blister and armed killers that spark triggers, my bars sicker and colder than hard winters, such a beast.. I fucked Noah's wife on the ark with her.
Cus' every since this little mafuckin' evil omens born, I been had the crown atop my head between on my broken horns. Emotions torn, I walk around with a frozen core, leave more dudes jumpin' out ya whip than the trojan horse.
I'm spastic with it, rap and spit with that savage image, ya Dad has risen I write my verses with packed syringes so you faggot bitches that rap up in this get crack to listen. If I'm in the booth all you fuckin' see is some flashes in it got some ratchets spittin' to kill you and then ya ashes get it, the active menace I (w)rap a sentence in acid spittin' so if you a king I'm glad to cap the crown like happy dentists,
so fuck humanity, son I'm headed for opulence, won't settle for a rapping legend imma be a god in this, the opposite of you bottom bitches whose talkin' shit, yeah my cognizance is beyond a limit I'm dominant, all I see is evil, but I'm trying to stay an optimist cus all these props I get from my tracks raisin' my confidence.
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One of the first tracks I've ever done, bear with me. Posted By: Babylon - 2014-10-09
Yo Babylon as in Crysis right? Shit was dope homie. Bar for bar and flow is just crazy. Kinda wished it was longer lol but a-1 work here tho dawg. DIMES DOWNLOAD, TOP 5 LIST ! Posted By: Doer - 2014-10-09
Multi game's on point in this.. Some very nice lines and good flow. I'd work on delivery a bit most lines didn't hit correct on the beat. It sounded like you were tired, running out of breath as you were approaching the end of the bar imo. Take your time..don't record a whole track in one go...I'm sure you recorded this on one go right? lol..anyway..very impressive for a first attempt Posted By: OSKAR - 2014-10-10
Impressive for a first track yo... Was a cool lil drop... The multi game is on point.. Maybe could use a tad bit or level changes with the delivery.. You could also turn the beat up.. and the vocals down a little to even it out.. If you find you cant say a part of the verse then its nothing to record the next part of the verse on a different section/track if that makes sense... like punch in type shit.. overall you on beat for the most part and got good lyrics.. keep grinding Posted By: Erupt da Monsta - 2014-10-11
Glad ya uploaded this. You should do more tracks and upload them on here, u def got mad potential. Wish i could give some feed but i'm not experienced enough to point out any flaws I guess, sounded dope to me Posted By: Subreal - 2014-10-11
First Off This Beat is sick as fuck you Better Kill the Track! But I thought your sound and Delivery Was Decent! Multis were on point! and Your Concepts Were sick.. Overall Id say Id play this a few more times to see if it can grow on me! Good Job! Posted By: ChainsNThangs - 2015-01-02
pretty solid track. your crysis right?
only type of negative critique i could give is the 1st 20-25 seconds was very momotone on delivery. but then you picked it up and spit solid lines and brought a better mic presence to go with them. good shit dude. Posted By: Mob_Figure - 2015-01-02
This was pretty dope man I gotta say. Lyrics were on point too. Great first track Posted By: Manhattan - 2015-01-09
multis ill in this. good work fam. also, this beat is always dope. Posted By: emceekilgore - 2015-01-09
On point u killed it. I fuck with this beat heavy.. Posted By: HandWrapz - 2015-01-14
Farrrcc'..You Got Game Cuzz'..Long tym' no C..Peacee..haha ..chur Posted By: Profite - 2018-06-23