2012 Prove Yourself Contest Entry..Hook was off the dome due too lack of recording time
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dope shit.... gotta say you coulda did better on the hook homie... i understand time issues and all but i know ya coulda did better.... liked the content.... diggin the fuck outa the beat.... ima go ahead and give this an 8... props yo Posted By: Savage Capone - 2012-10-07
DOPE SAVAGE SCRIPTZ -BODYBAGGERS- ALL DAY Posted By: Big-Ez - 2012-10-07
This had sum funny lines in it. You seemed to have a more relaxed approach which was nice. Try to stay away from saying some of your go to filler words. . .they get old. 1 Posted By: Letum - 2012-10-07
decent man, potential for sure. quality was nice, try adding in some voice overs. Posted By: Dissplay - 2012-10-07
this was sick as fuck. I agree with letterman, put some adlibs over this man... shit is pretty nice. i liked the toned down style you did here opposed to ur normal aggression. both styles is nice, but the layed backness really fit this well i thought. good shit B Posted By: M3GATRON - 2012-10-07
beat is dope-i guess you got your own style to me it always sounds like your screaming or to mad on delivery-had some bars at times your fillers really made this track work-hook was okay could use a touch of adlibs...or some type of effects to make it stand out more.i dont think your screaming when you ryme i think its your voices tone..it def takes over... Posted By: RELLE - 2012-10-07
nice job not the best from you but still pretty amazing Posted By: SJBlazin - 2012-10-07
Lol why you mad at me bro...i peeped yo shyt why would i ignore good stuff...and with that said yo shyt was tight good fire volcano erything...stay working peace Posted By: monti - 2012-10-08
This track is type dope. Nice flow, delivery, and lines yo. Keep this up man. Respect Posted By: izayamoorman - 2012-10-08
Track was okay bro but i didn't find anything to stand out. i listen to lots of music and it didn't stand up.. the way you spit is G but your lyrics need to be sat down an wrote and why you free your hook makes it feel like i just listened to you throw a little audio battle out..... you know, work hard on it work shows :) Posted By: MAD_SKILLZ - 2012-10-09
this was a'ight, verse was hot. Posted By: Skilly Pistolz - 2012-10-10
it wasnt great but it was good. flow was right timings right .like the multies but i think those are what bring you off topic. but all in all all gee bruda stay up / Posted By: GeE OH DeE - 2012-10-10
i fucks with it... nice shit homie... Posted By: Ray BaRz™ - 2012-10-14
Didnt sound to bad my man, quality was the only thing that could use a lil tone up but make do with the mic you got feel me...My quality aint half bad and im still usin a rockband mic lmfao...Just gotta perfect what you got man....But other than that i fucks with the shit cousin, keep up the good work fam...Dime sack Posted By: HonestE - 2012-10-14