| Not bad. Not feeling the hook though. Baby imagine, Boy, imagine. Verses pretty slick though. I'd re-do the Hook. Also, ya wanna have your hooks sounding different than your verses. The wy you have it, it all seems like one piece, if ya get me. The vocals the same the entire way through. Change up the hook, make it 'pop' more than the verses or dial the verses down. As it stands, both hook & verse are hit with the same vocal range and strenght. Just my two cents. Keep doing your thing, fam. Props. Posted By: Óðinn - 2020-01-23 |