I've been a lyricist since August 22nd, 2008. Having done this for a little over 5 years now, I've joined this site recently to test my battle game up against some of the greatest lyricists I've ever met. I win some, I lose some-- My cypher game's sick, but I need to develop on my battle game before I proceed with any more writing.
I rarely bother to look at the battle sections, though I do drop votes to keep respect amongst the staff... in any case, I usually don't go bar-for-bar when I do expos.
If you want the help, I'd be willing to provide you with more in-depth feedback on your bars, either through profile comments or PMs (not IM, I like to take a fair bit of time to really understand a bar and dissect it) - you're not a great battler (no offense), but you're obviously pretty smart, and I do see potential in you.
You remind me *a lot* of myself when I first joined LB, and I could see you becoming a serious problem, *if* you're willing to put in work and apply the advice that you can receive from both myself and others.
You one smart mutha fucca but still smgdmfh bro. When I say kopy n' pasted. It's really in the sense of do you read me or a simple kopy or 10-4 type ish bro. No funny just break down the word since your smart kopy in pasted=kopy and paste it? Kopy what I said. Kinda cool cat new York talk chief. Stick to it.
oh aight ye I wouldnt actually pronounce the T in thought so that makes sense and the spiderman I wouldnt pronounce the H in her so if you were english them bars bars would be fire lmao, nah but must be too much of a stretch in the slang appreciate the insight