i cant even comment on my own battle with you..did you seriously block me from voting in your battles? im probably one of the best voters youll ever have on site.. you is dumb.guess you did learn something from lizman.. and bnas
Imagine admitting that you're still learning while also being too much of a butthurt bitch to take someone's criticism on how to improve. Straight up: Look up what a simile is. You DON'T know what a simile is.
I knew you would say some fuck boy shit like that but at the same time you were supposed to send me a battle so who's the real "pissy sissy" you fat autistic pussy? Send an 8 so I can absolutely fucking destroy you.
Bitch battle me then don’t get all pissy because I voted how I felt. STFU and send me some shit. Put your money where your mouth is fucknugget. And similes I meant flips to your ‘quotes’ . U actually had zero similes if you want to be technical.
So basically this retard below me is pissed because I called him out on not knowing what a simile is. Everything he's talking about isn't what I was even talking about. He said I used several similes in a battle where I only used one and then goes on about talking all this other shit about punchlines like kid you're just mad stfu
lol. fam that was my honest assessment.. just because you capped multis, and hyphenated words dont make anything an actual punchline.. nor good for that matter..your verse wasnt terrible, and other than the one bar i liked, if you had kept that up each bar, you wouldve taken it easily.. all i saw was one strong punch from you that was it.. the lines were all runon with no real flow.. i dont know if that is the acceptable style on letsbeef nowadays, to write long runon sentences before leading to an end multi.. if thats the state we are in then thats not looking good.its a matter of preference and my style for an 8 is 1 bar=one punch.. so i ge 4 hits in an 8 liner.. if your droning on an on to get to one diss, then a 16 or 32 is better..