I could go on but i think i made my point

Just wait still more

Alright for starters, You were shit. You were all over the place.. i'm doin “cage fights” w/ a BRAIN-LESS CHUMP he couldn't “hang by a bar” idk if he's TRAINED TA JUMP so keep your your palms “dark and tight” like DRAINED THE JAR cus the only way he “leakin long shots“ is GRAY NON-STOP(gray goose)... Makes no sense your multies are wack and broken and your last rhyme for that bar didnt make sense.. But this is a starter

Cant take honest criticism then consider your self blocked