First Attempt of recording

[BrainInGear]

Here is an acapella freestyle that i recorded with a shitty microphone, its my first attempt of recording myself rapping [ note shitty mic ], Listening back on this, i don't really like the sound of my voice/flow, but its a start of something. I was wondering what you people think and in what ways i can improve.

track : Terrorist Audio Tape - [ Freestyle/Street Recording ] by Verbal Descendant on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

Thanks for you time reviewing my track and comments/advice.