Compare & Contrast

[|Ah|ReNA|]

drop one of your old verses and compare it to one of you newest ones.


http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_details.php?section=tb&id=380993

Compared to

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_details.php?section=tb&id=383742

I mean i had the basic idea... i just dragged out lines and stopped the punches effectiveness.. Also had too complex punches... I use to be an over-over-punchline acheiver haha... :D

Rule Stole my swagg... haha jk

[GodTheReptilian]

OLD VERSE:

Yo Listen, Po tha superb *SCHOLATIC-ANSWER* ur words a “tad-bit-random”…u couldnt “WIN” this battle with “SUN TZU”, “Demetrius of Bactria” in *GERMAN-PANZERS* in *SERVICE-with-ALEXANDER*(the Great) and *INSURGENTS-CONVERGIN-on-my-BANNER*!!// im David Adamovich *PERFECT-with-the-DAGGER*…”Food for thought”, CERTAINLY *SERVING-up-some-MATTER* (flesh/content)!!// Ur HOE? *BURN-that-BITCH-and-JAB-HER* u dont *DESERVE-that-trick-ILL-DRAG-her* through JASPER…”Black ARMS in the AIR”(guns)…HUEY (cartoon)? No, “DUCK”…PO will *TURN-PANTHER* (Black Panthers)!! (wtf?) I *LEARN-FASTER*…Make a “Good Wish”...the *LINES* “THICK” like *POLISH-BREAD”, who gives a fuck about the “WIND” (win) ill go *OVER-his-HEAD*……..*QUANTUM-MECHANICAL* INVOLED-effects on larger *SCALE-OBJECTS* tha *FRICTIONLESS-speed-FLOW* and liquids at TEMPERATURES-impede-SLOW near absolute, *INFINITE-ZERO*// “BLACK BODY RADIATION” reflected and transmitted, and *ORBITAL-HYBRIDIZATION* the “Schrodinger equation” *TRANSLATED*, “EJECTED-in-my-HAND, SCRIPTIN”…formulatin the ultimate *MATRIX* formations…DERIVATIONS *ETCHED-in-my-PLAN-to-SPIT- IT* eigenvalues concepts *AMID-tha-MAN* I invent the “SCAN-to-ENCRYPT-IT!! (huh?)// Ur not at all *ILL*, looks much like a WILD *SEIZURE-to-WE* u *SPEAK-and-u-BREATH*…its not any medicinal STYLE *TREATMENT-for-ME* at its *LEAST-I-can-SEE*…Influenza, Bubonic Plague, Cholera, Ebola and AIDS is nothing but a MILD *FEVER-to-ME*!!

a lot of decoration and soft punches...I had a tendency to ramble/cypher like expressions instead of battlin.

NEWEST:

Yo listen, the MESSAGE-is-GRAND for a more BLESSID-DEMAND…erectin WEAPONS-in-HAND the index FLEXED-to-COMMAND, “PRESSIN-the-PRESSURE through SECTIONS-of-LEVERS” to CONNECT-with-the-PAN then cause every skin cell in your body to STRETCH-and-EXPAND NEXT-to-the-GLANDS, dehydratin you instantly (BOOM)…turn your FLESH-into-SAND without even CORRECTIN-my-GLANCE! You think you have “HARDY BARS” and your VERSES-ELITE…a “DRUNKEN FLOW/floor”, with more decoration than MARDI-GRAS on BOURBON-STREET…IM sick I could HARDLY-COUGH and MURDER-the-BEAT(police patrol)…your whole “STYLE is VEGAN” as described: the FURTHEST-from-BEEF also your SERVICE-is-WEAK, Ill “DIVE” through your BODY and PROBABLY EMERGE-with-ur-SPEECH, the “X-FACTORS” is a different VERSION-of-“BEAST”…the other day you ask me could you “KICK SOMETHING”…I shove my hand into his back like VENTRILOQUIST and began WORKIN-his-FEET until his lungs BURST-on-my-CHEEK! ur a WEAK-RHYMER…when BEEF-STEERED in a BRIEF-BLURR ill stick you FEET-FIRST through a MEAT-GRINDER…before the blades smooth ur THIGHS-DAWG, ill remove ur EYES-BALLS and drop them in a DEEP-FRYER…ur FLOW wouldn’t BE-FIRE, if you were an electrician with HEAT-WIRES a million DEGREES-HIGHER than a CHEAP-LIGHTER! Po’s a “Magician”…ILLUSIONS-DISPERSED tha conclusive CONCLUSION-is-ELUSIVE, but PROVEN-to-WORK…MOVEMENT-is-WORSE simply by FUSIN-a-VERSE, the “GRAVITY” of the flow will KILL every HUMAN-on-EARTH!! I inadvertently DISEASE and INFECT-SOULS, CONCERNIN-ME I certainly but perfectly breech and ERECT-SCROLLS…a “RHINO” (bullet) “MARC’s” the SPOT and LEAVES-a-STRETCHED-HOLE so BIG in his head, if he “LIVES” he’ll PERMANENTLY SPEAK-with-an-ECHO


less decoration and more direct punches...structure improvements. Although I still see a few flaws within this.

I think the elevation is pretty obvious...well there you have it

Peace

[Just C]

fuck ya text..lol

[GodTheReptilian]

fuck ya text..lol

I dont TEXT anymore...btw, NO...fuck ya audio.

SEND IT...

[Just C]

^ You mad?

[Just C]

And ..lol..Why am I seeing u all over these forums asking people to send to you? o.0

If u got a problem....You send it

But not to me..I'm speaking in general

Man up shun

[GodTheReptilian]

Of course not...I'm just looking for an excuse to boot up my mic again.

[GodTheReptilian]

And ..lol..Why am I seeing u allover these forums asking people to send?

o.0

If u got a problem....You send it

But not me..I'm speaking in general

Man up shun

If you see me asking someone to send (i.e Krhyme)...its because hes suppose to according to the conditions set. Why would I have a problem...because you said "FUCK YA TEXT"...and I said "FUCK YA AUDIO"?

...and I had told you to "send it" if indeed YOU had a problem.

[Just C]

Oooooookayyyyyyy? o.0 lol

[|Ah|ReNA|]

hey Poet... send it lol b4 i go.

[|Ah|ReNA|]

btw plane takes off on friday..

[GodTheReptilian]

hey Poet... send it lol b4 i go.

SEND what?

[|Ah|ReNA|]

What i posted on your profile..

[GodTheReptilian]

What i posted on your profile..

lol...I dont text anymore dude...besides I wouldnt consider a battle between you and I (internally DPS) with the CLASSICK match-ups right around the corner.

[Just C]

lol weirdo...

[|Ah|ReNA|]

how bout audio??? need a good debut...

[|Ah|ReNA|]

JC!!!....god... CHANGE YOUR FUCKIN AVY THIS INSTANCE OR IM CALLING YOUR MOTHER AND RECORDING HER GETTING T BAGGED WITH A NICE LONG CRUMPET FOR YOU ENGLISH MEN!!!! haha

[GodTheReptilian]

how bout audio??? need a good debut...


If you insist...SEND IT

[Just C]

whats wrong with my avy?

[|Ah|ReNA|]

damnnn he doesnt get it... ITS ALREADY BAD YOU FUCKED UP HIS WHO SHOT YA TRACK NOW YOU GOTTA FUCK UP HIS ALBUM???? DAMN YOU BRITISH!!! IS NOTHING SACRED ANYMORE???

hahaha

[GodTheReptilian]

Its under the wrong name...ppl may actually begin to think you are nice. There is some truth to it though..."Ready to DIE".

[Just C]

I'm battling a guy called Big E in the beastmode tourney..

Just a lil light humour..

u should try it some time...

i mean you never know..

u might just grow to enjoy it...

[|Ah|ReNA|]

JC................................................ .................... Nuff said...

[Just C]

I'm not getting you

[|Ah|ReNA|]

nobody does... that's why i'm unique.

[Just C]

I guess u could call it ignorance

[|Ah|ReNA|]

or you can call it being a genius and everyone else being ignorant of the truth..

[Just C]

Yeah sure w.e

[|Ah|ReNA|]

Deviant Minds? Well i guess E.O.S. totally dead then... that sucks..

[Just C]

Yup.......I was gonna come to DPS..but DVM like my old crew

[UnEtHıCaL]

Just C is the personification of cream paint. ZzZzZz

[Just C]

Nice belt o.0

[UnEtHıCaL]

Two battles for a 2nd and another 3 for a medal. Im so cool.

[Just C]

Yes. You are..................

It's a just shame the lamest 1 is the only official 1 u have and ever will have

[UnEtHıCaL]

You arent even trying to add humor. JUST trollin', now thats lame.

[Just C]

Who's fault is that?

[UnEtHıCaL]

ZzZzZzZzZzZ

[Just C]

Exactly.....

[TheStudent]

Actually It's JusT C's Fault But He's Cool, No Homo But He's The First Audio Cat To Be In The Text Forum Ever Lmfao

[UnEtHıCaL]

Just like how student was the first computer geek to be in the crips.

[TheStudent]

Just like how student was the first computer geek to be in the crips.

I Should Be An Actor And I'm Actually I'm A Nerd Get It Straight HomeDog