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01-22-2011, 08:07 AM
VS. RED MYST

ima a killer! this SONS PROOF! ima have this CUNT MOVED cause after Cold Reigns Down, these bitches Fall Back like SUNROOFS (cold rains)! make like a plumber and clear ya PIPES DAME cause i SWIPE LAMES without the HYPE MAYNE! only time Myst Next To Cold is when we talkin bout his SNIPE AIM (missed cold! ha!) get at me! WHAT? YOU WAITIN? FUCK NOOBS HATIN and ya group cause ill CHUCK CREWS PLAYIN and have them hangin on My Every Last Word, like PUNCTUATION! he's about to break! SNAP!!! MYST BROKE! im like jack the rippa! kill then WRAP THIS BLOKE! his flow is TAPPED! SHITS WROTE! when i drop, its like i got Weed In My Ass! CRAP IS DOPE! always droppin DIMES with EXPENSIVE RHYMES cause you know my PEN IS FINE! hop over ya Built Forces! DA FENCE IS/"DEFENSES" CLIMBED cause my notebooks on NFL mode! full of OFFENSIVE LINES!