Drop some criticsm for a upstart?

[Prose_]

just need some expos or criticsm for my verses in these two battles. dont even gotta vote brah, just expo. tryin to get up there wit the vets and criticsm makes ya stronger so... help me out.

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_details.php?section=tb&id=382667


http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_details.php?section=tb&id=382673

thx:D

[Krhyme Killz]

why are you using the smiley for embarassment?

*peeps battles*


nevermind, yo

[Prose_]

why are you using the smiley for embarassment?

*peeps battles*


nevermind, yo

whatevs man. doesnt matter.