Carlos Brig... What is the Game Coming to? (track)

[Carlos Brigante]

http://limelinx.com/files/b846667a743d134a4fde5ec23208332e

let me kno wut ya think?

[Carlos Brigante]

Feedback, comments, anyone?

[Carlos Brigante]

uppin... ...

[1DollarShort]

Although you are a faggit...

I gotta be straight up. This was quite enjoyable, but i think you need to switch flow every now and then. Its like the same tone all the way through, nah mean?


Good shit... :high:

[Carlos Brigante]

Although you are a faggit...

I gotta be straight up. This was quite enjoyable, but i think you need to switch flow every now and then. Its like the same tone all the way through, nah mean?


Good shit... :high:

gud lookin... appreciate it... although you are a cum guzzler... but gud lookin on da feedback...

[ItsFame]

yeah.... ima agree wit ACS.... the flow should have been switched up a lil... but to be honest... that one of my biggest flaws.... usin the same flow....

i wasnt feelin the hook at all.... but the bars in the verses were pretty good

overall.... this was actually pretty decent.... you suprised me yo

my respect for you has gone up now son.... keep doin you

[Carlos Brigante]

yeah.... ima agree wit ACS.... the flow should have been switched up a lil... but to be honest... that one of my biggest flaws.... usin the same flow....

i wasnt feelin the hook at all.... but the bars in the verses were pretty good

overall.... this was actually pretty decent.... you suprised me yo

my respect for you has gone up now son.... keep doin you

appreciate that fam... gud lookin...

[ItsFame]

anytime yo

buy ayo.... if you ever got a track wit an extra verse on.... you know where to send it... whatever the topic :D

[Carlos Brigante]

lol aight i got u... i got 8 tracks done fam i been bangin out on mah time off LB...

[ItsFame]

haha nice nice..... i could upload 1 or 2 for you if you email em me..... if you like haha

[Carlos Brigante]

haha nice nice..... i could upload 1 or 2 for you if you email em me..... if you like haha

I might hit you on IM later or tomorrow... Gta see which ones i wna put up next...

[Carlos Brigante]

uppin... ...

[Jack-0-Lantern]

Delivery was monotone, no emotion. Flow was boring, content in the bars was played, and predictable in most places. Hook was awful, beat selection was boring. Nothing stand out about this at all. Don't PM me asking to feed your tracks anymore.

[John Dos]

pretty good rhymes/multis...ya emotion on the track need to improve, the 2 syllable rhyme scheme was gettin a lil old about half way through, no lie..decent work overall though.

[FreezyCT]

hook is good yoo i like it a lot...didnt expect this from you but now you set the bar so you have to exceed it with your next shit...flow is nice and the lyrics are on point...good shit yo

[Carlos Brigante]

appreciate the feedback whether gud or bad... might post up 1 or 2 more... montone das mah style love it or hate it...

[Krhyme Killz]

aight...this shit was pretty ill...voice is similar to Hov and flow is too..actually VERY Hov-like. Hook is forgettable, but decent. lyrically not mind blowing, but somewhat better than your battle shit.

no real pointers here fam, you've got the basics down, if anything come a little more unique witth flow and shit, but hey the same could be said about me lol...even though you aint nicer, bitch

[Jack-0-Lantern]

It's not like my criticism was bad, the majority of the thread have said the same things I did. They were just kinder with their wording.

[Carlos Brigante]

gud looks khryme... teezy i aint sweatin da criticism real talk i take it all as constructive and considerin da source i wont me lose any sleep at night... but gud looks ya'll...

[Just C]

Sounded a lil like R.A Ruged in parts...Not bad..hook was aight at first, but got old..Keep it up

[ItsFame]

Sounded a lil like R.A Ruged in parts...Not bad..hook was aight at first, but got old..Keep it up

why the hell are you awake at this time on a thursday night? hahaha

[Just C]

why the hell are you awake at this time on a thursday night? hahaha

I could ask you the same question lol

[ItsFame]

I could ask you the same question lol

i work in a bar...... :D

whats your excuse? hahaha

[Carlos Brigante]

gud lookin Jus... appreciate it ya'll might upload anotha tomorrow... keep dat feedback comin... appreciate it...

[dmullz]

Little raw as far as flow- some nice lyrics, hook was dull- lil staticy on some parts, but overall pretty nice

[Carlos Brigante]

gud lookin ^^

[Carlos Brigante]

uppin... ...

[King of Comedy]

I see some niggas bein super critical, but other than the hook ... It is straight to go. I've heard quite a few songs on this site, and I just don't believe dudes sound natural and comfortable behind the mic like Los ... not a bad delivery at all nigga

[Carlos Brigante]

I see some niggas bein super critical, but other than the hook ... It is straight to go. I've heard quite a few songs on this site, and I just don't believe dudes sound natural and comfortable behind the mic like Los ... not a bad delivery nigga

Gud looks fam^^

[EL BASTARD]

This was hot you got sum skills homie....look gay with a mic like ellen degeneres since i was born i was dyin to tell u this hahaha..

[Streetz De Hood]

just listened to this...pretty good...u had alot of dope lines although some were played but u speak real good english lol...ur one of the few ppl that actually say "-ing"...so i had to refrain from laughin during the hook but overall nice drop

[Carlos Brigante]

uppin......

[Carlos Brigante]

40 downloads das wussup appreciate that ya'll

[Carlos Brigante]

buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuump