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Rican
05-03-2010, 09:51 PM
I was conversating with -Reefer and He brought this funny thing out.

How it seems that Remark and I kind of created a new way to see wordplay

And How more cats be using it now.

What he calls

'Sentence Plays'

What are Sentence Plays?

Example:

Rican.

1-) As I ''Ceal-Ing Arts: Faith'' like the SISTINE CHAPEL!!/[X_x!]
2-) Even If this ''Player: Handle Bars'' He couldnt ''Turn The Tables'' in A FOOSBALL MATCH

Remark

1-) thats a “Broad-way” to Follow, like MUSICAL JUNKIES!
2-) cuz “RULE: In The Way!” like PASS INTERFERENCE
3-) “Or-Bit a Cat” like sending ANIMALS TO SPACE

There's much more But you get my deal.

EJT
05-03-2010, 09:52 PM
Didn't you kinda answer your own question ?

UnEtHıCaL
05-03-2010, 09:57 PM
I don't see much difference. It just seems like decent regular wordplay to me.

reEFer
05-03-2010, 10:02 PM
You couldn't get "play from a-broad" in the NBA as a FOREIGN DRAFT PICK/

UnEtHıCaL
05-03-2010, 10:03 PM
^Was that one? Because that is just the usual technique to me.

Juankarlos
05-03-2010, 10:04 PM
The A-Broad was used In a Dif way by Rican aswell.

And nah Eth. IT's different.

Odd God
05-03-2010, 10:09 PM
that's a "Broad-Way" to follow like cruising a uterus

Juankarlos
05-03-2010, 10:12 PM
That's a Hot one.

UnEtHıCaL
05-03-2010, 10:17 PM
:S I still don't see whats different about them. I get how it's different from the vague ass/vegas type of technique, but doing things like this has been around for a long time, especially good when the battler uses a common phrase in it.

Juankarlos
05-03-2010, 10:19 PM
Uhm That's Dif.

Normal WP is Vague ass.

The Sentence Plays brings strings of concepts together

Dont worry, You dont use them

remarK
05-03-2010, 10:20 PM
there is no difference... all you do is add : in between words..

and you think I took up on your style? Lmaooo..

reEFer
05-03-2010, 10:20 PM
We're all aware that it's been around, what he's saying is that he thinks it should be classified as something different.. not just wordplay.

UnEtHıCaL
05-03-2010, 10:21 PM
I know them, many people use them though, I mean it's far from a 'new style'. It's better then the 'sound' type of wordplay. Man I actually wrote about these like 2 years ago in an explained wordplay thread and got blasted for mentioning such an old style.

Rican
05-03-2010, 10:22 PM
I didnt.

I say that your devoloping a form of Sentence plays.

Ive got my own of sentence Plays with my style in it

You have your own sentence plays

What Im saying

We have devoloped and Created this style in each form

Rican
05-03-2010, 10:22 PM
Uh. In LB? Show me someone who fucked with it?

UnEtHıCaL
05-03-2010, 10:23 PM
We're all aware that it's been around, what he's saying is that he thinks it should be classified as something different.. not just wordplay.

AHHH I get what you mean now. It's still not something different, it's just making the origional style stronger by adding more words into the mix. It's still wordplay as wordplay is playing with words, and giving them different meanings and sounds etc, which he is still doing.

there is no difference... all you do is add : in between words..

and you think I took up on your style? Lmaooo..

LMAO I thought that at first too.

UnEtHıCaL
05-03-2010, 10:24 PM
Uh. In LB? Show me someone who fucked with it?

Erm, check the majority of the big vets, actually check the majority of the good battlers. Hell even king of sparta fucked with it with his "take a breather" line.

Rican
05-03-2010, 10:26 PM
Uh's that not what I mean.

King Of sparta rarely used Wordplay

Someone who used a bit was Illy but yet in a vague normal wp form

remarK
05-03-2010, 10:28 PM
I slightly see what you are saying but you def tried to make it out like I was taking to your style of wordplay..

you said " this style that I'VE created"...

and then posted two forms of wordplay by me saying that other cats started using it.. lol

UnEtHıCaL
05-03-2010, 10:29 PM
I mean that particular line...I'm going to ruin it because I can't remember the wording but...

I don't chill out, you couldn't make me "take a breather" if I ripped out your lung.

Rican
05-03-2010, 10:32 PM
Style.

This is what I meant.

We boh Developed different styles of that Style.

You feel me?

I've got MY STYLE. which is the one I posted 1st.

I'm ah re edit that

yeah thats a pun. not a sentence play

a word on blah blah

Rican
05-03-2010, 10:33 PM
You gets my deal now?

Happy Markos?

remarK
05-03-2010, 10:39 PM
okay... I feel you, but I gotta go with Uneth on this..

I think it should still be considered wordplay..

and its just adding more words within the context of the bar that may contain metaphors as well..

like my frag-mental line...

when i thought of that i was just going through words in my head that sound like they could have other meanings..

usually when you do that its gonna be a longer word cuz all the short, one syllable wordplays are usually played..

so I came up with fragmental right.. separated it into two words and then used metaphors to explain the diff meanings and make the punch hit that much harder..

Rican
05-03-2010, 10:42 PM
actually frag mental isnt really one but I threw it in

its just wordplay.

reEFer
05-03-2010, 10:44 PM
Maybe you should describe it as a play on more than one word.

Rican
05-03-2010, 10:45 PM
VATO'S NEW IN THE GHETTO? If So HOLLOWS BRUISE-IN THE TEMPLE than FOLLOW DUDE OFF TO STRETCH YOU because the INF RED RANGE'll MEET 'N AIM to ''Beat: The Pain'' with no AUTO-TUNE INSTRUMENTALS!!/[X_x!]



example of a a super basic sentence play.

CLAWS TO CHEST since HE'S IN PRE-TEEN STAGE, I'll ''Drive 'Em Crazy'' So I'm ah ''Gopher the Kill'' till HIS WINDSCREEN BREAKS Plus In this Game? Only time ''Sho Firm In It'' would be In A LIMOUSINE RACE!!/[Chaffeur Minute!]

basic sentence play tossed in with a regular wp.

remarK
05-03-2010, 10:48 PM
idk its just wordplay to me..

you sorta lost me..

cuz now you and reefer have conflicting ideals.. You said the Frag-Mental line isn't one.. yet its a play on two words..

then Reefer says maybe describe it as a play on more than one word..... lol

why not just say we are good with wordplay, end of story... lmao

Rican
05-03-2010, 10:50 PM
What he means is

Check his A-Broad one for example, the whole concept.

and the Frag mental is just regular wp.

I'll re-Edit.

I'll put a new one

Rican
05-03-2010, 10:54 PM
I edited your Examples

Or-Bit a Cat.

Play on TWO WORDS, than referencing the Animal to Space

that's a perfect example

Rican
05-03-2010, 10:57 PM
I thought the same thing, But if you take a look at it fah real

It has a Huge Dif.

Rican
05-03-2010, 11:00 PM
your another example

remarK
05-03-2010, 11:00 PM
okay I got you...

I guess its a bit different..

like you woulda prolly said "Or: Bit A Cat" like sending Animals to space

I see what you're saying now... but I never think of that before hand.. if the wordplay comes to me I just use it the way I see fit.. and sometimes it works out that way idk..

Rican
05-03-2010, 11:02 PM
thats the way we think.

But IF we truly look at it.

It's not that easy to think those bars

Rican
05-03-2010, 11:02 PM
And Yes, Missy. . I know you what you mean

But 50 percent of my ish, Go over heads.

Rican
05-03-2010, 11:05 PM
which is what I'm trying to talk about

I seen you fuck with the sentence plays

remarK
05-03-2010, 11:14 PM
lol... I'm still going with wordplay though, :D

Rican
05-03-2010, 11:17 PM
yeah not that much but he fucks with it a bit.

Remarkkkkkkkk, I'm telling you.

haahaha

TeXsPiLLzZZ
05-03-2010, 11:41 PM
:high: i kno wat u talkin bout rican , even tho i suck , but i kno what u mean , .. thats why u'll always have fresher concepts ,

remarK
05-03-2010, 11:42 PM
.this dude gonna need A WORD FROM A DOC!

if you worded that wordplay better that shit woulda been soooo hot Missy.

TeXsPiLLzZZ
05-03-2010, 11:45 PM
He can Have 'High Heels with...raised Arms' I still wont Be "SALUTING THAT BITCH"

^^even tho my wording is screwed , it's almost wat rican is talkin Bout almost ....

Rican
05-03-2010, 11:46 PM
wait, show the whole ish remark

Rican
05-03-2010, 11:49 PM
try to word that Popular

TeXsPiLLzZZ
05-03-2010, 11:49 PM
eeh ^^ @Missy ... i dont Kno... High heels/bitch .... raised arms/saluting

i try to damn hard probably

Rican
05-03-2010, 11:59 PM
yes it is missy

remarK
05-03-2010, 11:59 PM
see thats why you always gotta read shit twice... nah the shit was straight Missy..

Rican
05-04-2010, 12:01 AM
depending on what type of shit you writing ofcourse

remarK
05-04-2010, 12:24 AM
this gives me an idea of shouting out the people that really helped you with some form of your text game.

ie:

When it comes to wordplay, the only person that i can say really opened my eyes to how wordplay can work in different ways was Chizzel.

When it comes to metaphors, I gotta say I seen some reeeal crazy shit from DaDDiO that influenced me..

Multis?... uhhh to be honest I think the first person that influenced me with that structure of writing was BestMcEva lmaooooo

Rican
05-04-2010, 12:28 AM
^^^ bestmc lol

RULE
05-04-2010, 02:42 AM
This is what a lotta people do with wordplay hahahahaha!

But you are one of the best at creating fresh wordplay, boast about that hahaha!

UnEtHıCaL
05-04-2010, 11:37 AM
this gives me an idea of shouting out the people that really helped you with some form of your text game.

ie:

When it comes to wordplay, the only person that i can say really opened my eyes to how wordplay can work in different ways was Chizzel.

When it comes to metaphors, I gotta say I seen some reeeal crazy shit from DaDDiO that influenced me..

Multis?... uhhh to be honest I think the first person that influenced me with that structure of writing was BestMcEva lmaooooo

Chizzle helped me out with wordplay. I used to talk to him alot on in pms back in the day and run ideas by him.

Askari taught me the essentials of flow and metaphors.

I guess I learned multies from experience. Me and UA were fucking with them a little before we joined here.

CounterCulture
05-04-2010, 12:03 PM
I learned my style from Moltsani, H-Nigga, BestMcEva and Cash One.

CounterCulture
05-04-2010, 12:05 PM
I was conversating with -Reefer and He brought this funny thing out.

How it seems that Remark and I kind of created a new way to see wordplay

And How more cats be using it now.

What he calls

'Sentence Plays'

What are Sentence Plays?

Example:

Rican.

1-) As I ''Ceal-Ing Arts: Faith'' like the SISTINE CHAPEL!!/[X_x!]
2-) Even If this ''Player: Handle Bars'' He couldnt ''Turn The Tables'' in A FOOSBALL MATCH

Remark

1-) thats a “Broad-way” to Follow, like MUSICAL JUNKIES!
2-) cuz “RULE: In The Way!” like PASS INTERFERENCE
3-) “Or-Bit a Cat” like sending ANIMALS TO SPACE

There's much more But you get my deal.
I'm pretty sure people been goin that kinda shit for a long time..

but honestly, define this "sentence play" thingy.

Manny Festo
05-04-2010, 12:22 PM
Uh. In LB? Show me someone who fucked with it?

i've been using whole lines with connected thematic wordplay for a long ass time

all you really talking about is using concept wordplay and a few people have been doin it

UNKNOWN ARTIST
05-04-2010, 01:17 PM
that aint nothing new ..... shit's been around forever ..... chizzle was doing it long before you were .... shit you'll find it in a lot of my 07 battles

Accurit Phacts
05-04-2010, 01:51 PM
i've been using whole lines with connected thematic wordplay for a long ass time

all you really talking about is using concept wordplay and a few people have been doin it

lol. aye, thats what they call it huh.

STERIC
05-04-2010, 01:58 PM
interesting thread

Manny Festo
05-04-2010, 02:03 PM
lol. aye, thats what they call it huh.

those two voices in my head........yes they call it that

just the first thing i thought to type lol

UnEtHıCaL
05-04-2010, 04:53 PM
I learned my style from Moltsani, H-Nigga, BestMcEva and Cash One.

H Nigga and Cash One aren't terrilbe people to learn from, if you really mean Percy Jackson/Irrepressible and Orthadox.

Rican
05-04-2010, 06:41 PM
Chizzle wasnt doing it.

Chizzy fucked with Long Wordplays

NBS Style. Etc.

Rican
05-04-2010, 06:42 PM
actually yeah fulc your right.

you been fucking with the concepts

i give you that. you prlly been the 1st

but not that one im mentioning

you started to fuck with sentence plays on e.e

Rican
05-04-2010, 06:42 PM
and late fulc ofcourse

Rican
05-04-2010, 06:43 PM
but FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK IT.

close this

Krhyme Killz
05-04-2010, 07:03 PM
lol...now i feel like my shits unfresh lmao

UNKNOWN ARTIST
05-05-2010, 08:08 AM
****THIS JUST IN***

me and jason were talking on msn just throwing some bars around ..... and we invented a new style ..... we're calling it .....MULTI'S ..... you just rhyme more than one syllablle .... it sounds great :rolleyes:

RULE
05-05-2010, 08:29 AM
****THIS JUST IN***

me and jason were talking on msn just throwing some bars around ..... and we invented a new style ..... we're calling it .....MULTI'S ..... you just rhyme more than one syllablle .... it sounds great :rolleyes:

Hold up...

..Whats this 'RHYMING' you talking about???

The Next One
05-05-2010, 08:36 AM
HOW ABOUT MAKING 2 VERSES IN 1!!!?? huh

CounterCulture
05-05-2010, 11:09 AM
Hold up...

..Whats this 'RHYMING' you talking about???
I thought rap was just saying a bunch of nonsense as fast as you can??

RULE
05-05-2010, 11:10 AM
I thought rap was just saying a bunch of nonsense as fast as you can??

I think we have been mis-informed... :eek:

CounterCulture
05-05-2010, 11:20 AM
I think we have been mis-informed... :eek:
WTF man.

Does this mean I should stop taking my rap style from Cam'ron???

RULE
05-05-2010, 11:26 AM
WTF man.

Does this mean I should stop taking my rap style from Cam'ron???

Aww man! I was biting Mike Jones!

UA just ruined rap for me...

Odd God
05-05-2010, 09:36 PM
Sentence plays have been around for a while, you'll find them in this thing we call 'rap music'

Any new directions left for rhymes to go?

UnEtHıCaL
05-05-2010, 10:55 PM
You guys use words in rapping? Shit I thought I invented that!

Celsius
05-06-2010, 12:37 AM
Ziiiiiiiiiiiiiing

CounterCulture
05-06-2010, 12:43 AM
well I invented the concept of rapping.

UNKNOWN ARTIST
05-06-2010, 07:55 AM
i was the first person who ever put words to an instrumental .... i called it a song

Odd God
05-06-2010, 09:19 AM
I was the first caveman to bang two rocks together and rhyme Ogg with Gog

Rican
05-14-2014, 10:56 PM
Haha haha

Louie Dawgs
05-14-2014, 11:40 PM
What a random fucking thread bump.

Babylon
05-15-2014, 12:36 AM
I was the Demigod that convinced Kronos that one of his sons were destined to overthrow him as they grew which lead to the event in which Kronos ate all but one child, Zeus, who was raised by a Wayfarer and, once grown was to go to his father and cut his fallen brethren out of his fathers stomach with the help of the Titans which he later imprisoned in the most complex prisons ever to be conjured. Meaning, me simply telling Kronos that one of his sons was destined to overthrow him lead to the event which inspired one of his sons to overthrow him in the first place.

lllllllllllll
05-15-2014, 12:43 AM
I created text battles

ILLoKWENT
05-15-2014, 01:24 AM
I put I in ILL.....

Lockhart
05-15-2014, 10:18 AM
I put Lockhart in... Lockhart.

God Bless.

Hubert Cumberdale
05-15-2014, 11:02 AM
I was right in everything I said in this damn thread :D

Hubert Cumberdale
05-15-2014, 11:08 AM
I put the D in you're Daughter

You also put the apostrophe and the extra E in Your Daughter.

Trademark
05-15-2014, 02:57 PM
that's a "Broad-Way" to follow like cruising a uterus

I spit something like that, on a different site.



I'm known for stompin' jaws, lame it's a fact he shook, see...
This faggot's got some Broadway's, since he's always actin' pussy.