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UnEtHıCaL
03-29-2010, 01:33 PM
First beat...

http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/proddetail.php?prod=57916-Piano-298

Feedback highly appretiated guys.
Ohs
03-29-2010, 01:35 PM
shit is whack.....lol...
UnEtHıCaL
03-29-2010, 01:39 PM
Copy and pasting the comments on your verse from our battle^ :O

Hey, I guess feedback is feedback.
Ohs
03-29-2010, 01:40 PM
lol nah its ok..
UNKNOWN ARTIST
03-29-2010, 01:41 PM
there's something catchy about it but it's too repettitive .... so seems amateurish .. which is expected for your first beat ...but you gotta have a slight change where the hooks gonna go so it breaks the beat up a bit
UNKNOWN ARTIST
03-29-2010, 01:42 PM
i swear when it started i thought it was billie jean
UnEtHıCaL
03-29-2010, 01:43 PM
Yeah, I thought of all that UA, but then I thought 'Hmm, all of that seems like alot of effot for now' :D. Yeah I took it more as a project than something someone could spit on.
RULE
03-29-2010, 01:45 PM
i swear when it started i thought it was billie jean

112 - Only You (Remix).... Thats what it reminded me off hahaha

Nice for a first EtH. It is too basic though. You have a good idea of structure though just needs MORE going on.
UnEtHıCaL
03-29-2010, 01:56 PM
Yeah, now I'm afraid of how creative Ill need to be in the next one.
RULE
03-29-2010, 01:58 PM
You got a topical to write...

...GET TO WORK!!!!!!
UnEtHıCaL
03-29-2010, 02:00 PM
But I have some mac and cheese in the oven!
The Kid Eddie T
03-29-2010, 02:10 PM
to me it sounds like you only got 2 layers....a drum, and piano
throw a few more things in there.... maybe a bass line.....
dmullz
03-29-2010, 02:34 PM
^^ agreed a bass line, and maybe a break in tempo or w.e it was decent but it was just to simple, but it can definately be added to
UnEtHıCaL
03-29-2010, 03:39 PM
I had the drum layers and two piano layers, so yeah I know what you mean.