Gasping For Air.....(FEED BACK)

[MoNsTa CLiPS]

http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64461

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[Odd God]

you done well man, had some fresh ideas in there and some good wordplay.

[MoNsTa CLiPS]

Good Lookin Man