looking for help

[Trauma~B~Silent]

i need tips in how to lay a proper text if anyone can help it would be nice

[dmullz]

ya get a good name, and deveolpe a styel wit multies and set ups u can have dope concepts but they suck cuz u deliver em wrong but rule basicly hit it all on teh nose lol

[dmullz]

I know i actually put a count down on my calender siked about it

[Trauma~B~Silent]

thank you guys

[dmullz]

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_details.php?section=tb&id=331005

In other news vote this up gettin slept on Dmullz deliveries again lmao, no really rule and new guy get on this ishh ill return fairly but fair does not me ill ride ur cock n vote for u and rule u know that that go hard forum post is turning into a punch in our battle some how ahahah

[dmullz]

Hahaha no doubt fam!

Peepin ya battle, got two opens if ya lookin to read some ether.



No problem dude, stay up.

Ya i just expo'd ya battle wit too fresh liked the priest line lol, my vote for the day has been dropped fair n expo'd

[Silk Account 22]

Anyone else notice how fast this went off topic? :eek:

[FistaCuffz]

yo props to Mullz and Rule though.. that was good feedback for me too.. i know i'm stronger conceptually than delivery wise and i couldn't fire out how put it down correctly.. i came from a site where the structure was allll different.. the LB formats been a challenge.. Dope!

Peace y'all
-RHYMIN!