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Dysfunctional
02-26-2018, 06:54 PM
I rep LB on the Live Battle Scene all the time. Can I get some feed on this new drop of mine? One of my best performances IMO Thanks in Advance

BEASTMODE - DYSFUNCTIONAL VS EAST END CLIPS - RAP BATTLE - YouTube
Lockhart
02-27-2018, 12:16 AM
Already given you feedback fam Dysfunctional good shit, though.
Rant
02-27-2018, 12:29 AM
You look like a cancer patient gave birth to a cancer patient.
Shodan
02-27-2018, 12:37 AM
You look like a cancer patient gave birth to a cancer patient.

He fucking died on the spot.
Supsie
02-27-2018, 12:52 AM
Asian guy, another wannabe gangsta his just fake AF... you where better then him bro.
Rant you look like a sea world patient cause ur a sick whale...
Dysfunctional
02-27-2018, 06:48 PM
I wonder why I come back here and its the same reason no new people come here. Cuz 95% of the old heads still here dont wanna help people just troll em lol
Rant
03-01-2018, 01:33 PM
I troll you, because literally ANY time I've given you feedback, you refuse to listen to it. You defend your wack shit to death, instead of taking the constructive points and incorporating them.
Dysfunctional
03-01-2018, 06:53 PM
I troll you, because literally ANY time I've given you feedback, you refuse to listen to it. You defend your wack shit to death, instead of taking the constructive points and incorporating them.

I'm not the only one who's noticed that almost everyone gives super harsh feedback instead of constructive criticism. If you were to give me constructive criticism instead of just saying im shit or something maybe i'd listen .
Rant
03-01-2018, 07:02 PM
I've given you real feedback a myriad of times. And your response, as I've stated, was to defend your material, instead of taking that feedback. If you want people to give you feedback, you can't constantly dismiss it, otherwise they're going to stop giving you feedback.
Dysfunctional
03-01-2018, 07:43 PM
I've given you real feedback a myriad of times. And your response, as I've stated, was to defend your material, instead of taking that feedback. If you want people to give you feedback, you can't constantly dismiss it, otherwise they're going to stop giving you feedback.

Never have you given actual good spirited feedback cmon you dont even believe that lol
Rant
03-01-2018, 09:50 PM
You're full of shit. And doing nothing but proving my point.
Dysfunctional
03-02-2018, 06:33 PM
how am i proving your point? you didnt gave any criticism of the battle. so me arguing with you now isnt proving shit
Rant
03-02-2018, 07:00 PM
I hope your dad dies of cancer again. :|
Fidel Z
03-02-2018, 07:30 PM
I hope your dad dies of cancer again. :|

You're built like a puddle. You're seconds away from becoming a cancer patient stfu
KG The Prince
03-02-2018, 07:39 PM
how am i proving your point? you didnt gave any criticism of the battle. so me arguing with you now isnt proving shit

tbh Rant does have good feedback, try listening to him for once. He can be a pretentious dick but he knows his shit.
Rant
03-02-2018, 08:43 PM
You're built like a puddle. You're seconds away from becoming a cancer patient stfu

I'm not a cancer patient. I am cancer.

Edit:

You no longer have permission to use my short film idea now. :|
Aggo
03-02-2018, 09:09 PM
Oh, so now were playing takesie backsies?
Rant
03-02-2018, 09:13 PM
Oh, so now were playing takesie backsies?

Yeah, we are. You going to take back all those handjobs now?
Fidel Z
03-02-2018, 09:23 PM
I'm not a cancer patient. I am cancer.

Edit:

You no longer have permission to use my short film idea now. :|

Damn, I apologise.
Rant
03-02-2018, 09:34 PM
Damn, I apologise.

Apologize to this dick. :|
DjNarcotize
03-02-2018, 10:57 PM
This was a really good battle. I already gave feedback as well. I totally had a wrong impression of the battle. I will give it another look and come back with a second opinion later.

For the record, I still think Dysfunctional did a brilliant job in this battle and I support his efforts in climbing the competitive chain.
Dysfunctional
03-04-2018, 10:05 AM
I hope your dad dies of cancer again. :|

Really man? SMH
Rant
03-04-2018, 06:41 PM
Of course not really. Most people don't have the chance to die twice.

Also that would be cruel.
Dysfunctional
03-05-2018, 07:07 PM
Of course not really. Most people don't have the chance to die twice.

Also that would be cruel.

My dad's not dead you inbred lol
Rant
03-05-2018, 07:56 PM
My dad's not dead you inbred lol

Oh.

Kudos.