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RhetoriK
03-26-2017, 03:42 PM
I dig the new formatting features. However, don't over-format your shit. Trust, I've won and lost and won my share of battles, but the best advice I got was from Huey J. One of the dopest (HOF caliber) writers the site has seen. Dude didn't capitalize or "" '' //-- AT ALL and still got the point across.

If your the NawkOut or even Rican archetype of battler, you have to put something around the wordplay. This is more from lack of faith in the readers ability

But use examples like @HueyJ DaDDiO, or UNKNOWN ARTIST. The track record says something.

I'm going to write something about battler archetypes here soon.

Long story LESS IS FUCKING MORE. No more :monkey: shit. Don't fuck it up.

Btw, Godbody are/we're you pULSe?

-Steelio Gracie
Shodan
03-26-2017, 03:55 PM
RhetoriK Godbody is pulse, yeah.
Babylon
03-26-2017, 04:08 PM
See you in the semi-finals ShotsFired
RhetoriK
03-26-2017, 04:12 PM
RhetoriK Godbody is pulse, yeah.

Wooord. Thanks.
Aggo
03-26-2017, 05:51 PM
Nice work dickweasels. You gave my fomo ptsd.
RhetoriK
03-26-2017, 06:28 PM
Nice work dickweasels. You gave my fomo ptsd.

Oh, condolences to your "fomo" bruh.
Aggo
03-26-2017, 06:36 PM
No fomo
Enfinite
03-26-2017, 11:04 PM
Now how do you feel about complex verses with a ton of references crammed into a punch vs. simple straight to the point verses? RhetoriK. Right now a lot of dudes are all about complexity.
RhetoriK
03-27-2017, 01:10 AM
It can be done but in text it's all about how it's delivered. A clean verse is a clean verse. The more readable verse wins. It's been my downfall as a fairly complex writer too many times lol
Shodan
03-27-2017, 01:22 AM
Ayy RhetoriK Apparently your most recent battle was in 2013. That's before I joined...
RhetoriK
03-27-2017, 08:37 AM
Ayy RhetoriK Apparently your most recent battle was in 2013. That's before I joined...

That's quite the observation young man. You get a gold star.

https://media.tenor.co/images/260db7ce69c0930c7f996c3a555a2efb/tenor.gif

Another fun fact. My name was Captain Obvious for a while. I can relate.
Lockhart
03-27-2017, 08:40 AM
*Shrugs*
RhetoriK
03-27-2017, 09:30 AM
*Shrugs*

You're actually one of the ones that doesn't have this problem.
However, you shouldn't call out Ohs for slant rhyming and then slant the very next syllable lol

Jokes aside.. you know what the hell you're doing.
Rican
03-28-2017, 12:29 AM
#thecarteldiaries
Lockhart
03-28-2017, 12:45 AM
You're actually one of the ones that doesn't have this problem.
However, you shouldn't call out Ohs for slant rhyming and then slant the very next syllable lol

Jokes aside.. you know what the hell you're doing.

Lol props, fam.