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Just-Kevin
11-16-2014, 03:13 PM
Wassup LB..It's been a while
Here is my new stuff

https://scontent-a-vie.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xpa1/t31.0-8/1512246_10205556157014206_4948899050730591642_o.jp g

https://scontent-b-vie.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xpa1/t31.0-8/10460820_10204431358214939_2069181530529969283_o.j pg

Just-Kevin
11-18-2014, 06:45 AM
yo V3numb what do you think of these?

V3numb
11-18-2014, 06:12 PM
my bad was meaning to get to this earlier but wanted to not rush a comment



they're both dope man,

1st one kinda has a galactic (marvel) type vibe to it mixed in with some emotion, color composition is nice, SOME SCI-FI TO IT TOO,(caps lock just now ignore it), looks like u went a bit crazy with Topaz lol but it kinda goes, maybe tone it down a bit tho cause topaz is more of a crutch and messes up instead of make better most pictures depeending on what it is, luckily this is more sci-fi tho and it goes more with it, blending aint bad either


thing tho is kinda looks flat, add some depth, and do something with the text looks awkward, nice try and typography tho just placing is off and the effect of the clipping mask wasnt all that appealing, took away from the picture itself (*well done tho), also some foreground effects would be nice maybe some meteors or somthing




2nd one pretty abstract, nice color composition again, overall a nice piece

thing is the orb looks kinda forced, its whole body look like its moving but the orb just looks unaffected by the motion of the "w.e" it is in general lol, for the most i know what you did here, and have a few of the brushes myself lol, overall has a pretty good "flow" to it all well done

JayDiamondScarFace
11-18-2014, 08:46 PM
I think these are cool,like the theme outterspace really cool

Just-Kevin
11-24-2014, 03:30 PM
Thanks V3numb
Yeah too much Topaz in the first one but it really looks 100 times better than the original piece I was doing

The sec one is something I never finished but it looks okay to share it around :P