ViTRiOL = Fair Voters Club? LMAO!

[Godbody]

How the fuck ya'll give this faggot a FVC title? This dude can't read or vote for shit. How you feel being the only person voting against the winners in a land-slide battle? I'm not sayin which battle but it shouldnt be news nor am I swayin...again we dont need the vote and the writings on the wall

i just want a bar-for-bar breakdown to see how the other verse was more consistent structurally & punch-wise by the bar

[Fidel Z]

All you do is complain. CHILL.

[Godbody]

I'm not complainin

I'm weedin out the dead weight and puttin these lame niggas on blast

ViTRiOL & The Dope Man down, who's next?

[RULE]

C'mon P aint you been around the interblock long enough to let a single vote that doesnt go your way slide?

[Babylon]

Go away.

[Godbody]

Its not a single vote first its The Dope Man with his hate-vote faggotry for getting booted from LoD

then its ViTRiOL with his dickriding tendencies - because it HAD to be dickriding. Not to take anything away from my opponents they came with some fire..at least 1 of them did. But ..fuck it before ya'll mob me for 'swaying'

anybody who reads the battles knows what it is and i let votes like these get to me cuz if ya'll let 1 get away and say "well it isnt a hate vote it was fair" ya'll gon let 2 or 3 get away and say the same shit

lets cut the fuckery out now

dont ever come on 1 of my battles w/out reading both verses in entirety and doing your due diligence if u dont get a concept or a wordplay

Crysis is butt hurt cuz LoD fucked him lol and he feels salty now

[The Dope Man]

smh.

Damn give it a rest bro. What? you finally got a decent verse cause of Manhattan so now you feel like you should win automatically??? smh

Ya mad annoying... Can't wait til Lod boots you after Illmania.

[Godbody]

That aint how I'm feelin at all

fair is fair
hate is hate
dickriding is dickriding

its in black & white b...stop tryna read between lines

my worst bar > your best bar

[ViTRiOL]

How the fuck ya'll give this faggot a FVC title? This dude can't read or vote for shit. How you feel being the only person voting against the winners in a land-slide battle? I'm not sayin which battle but it shouldnt be news nor am I swayin...again we dont need the vote and the writings on the wall

i just want a bar-for-bar breakdown to see how the other verse was more consistent structurally & punch-wise by the bar

Your half of the verse took down the quality of the entirety of the drop if you want me to be brutally honest. While I felt your verse was somewhat more readable based on flow and scheme-work, the other drop had a higher density of punches. Had you matched that, you would have got it.

But please don't question my impeccable judgement, you sound like everyone else.

"A vote against me is an unfair vote," followed by endless baby tears.

[Babylon]

Crysis is butt hurt cuz LoD fucked him lol and he feels salty now

You should see my diary, all you fuckers catching hell in that bitch.

[The Dope Man]

These threads just prove how soft you are...

Anyone who makes two threads over a couple votes gotta be faggot.

& anyone rollin wit you is a definite suspect.

[Babylon]

Dopemans catching more respect every post.

[FiNAL WoRD]

LOL stick together crysis and bluntman

[The Dope Man]

comin from the kid that's ridin pulse's dick in every thread..smh

[ViTRiOL]

I'm remaining unbiased so you lot can keep getting fair ones.

If Godbody gonna bleed out of his vagina every time then he ain't worth a read. Manny could've won it for both of you but your amniotic buckets of blood and girl juice ruined it.

[Godbody]

ViTRiOL so your argument is that my part brought down the quality of the entire verse, right? I went 2nd in my battle

So explain to me how the person who went 2nd for the opposing party had a stronger outing than me

there is no way their second half of the verse was written better, had a 'higher density of punches' (lmfao) or even had punches that were 1/2 as hard as mine. Not even a functional wordplay

Get the fuck outta here either you're a delusional dickrider or you're flat out lying about readin the battle

pick 1

[Óðinn]

Lmao.

.

[Godbody]

ViTRiOL's backed into a corner now so he goes offline

If he even has the audacity to explain how the 2nd half of the opposing verse was better than my 2nd half it'll be some sig worthy shit

im out. aint speakin on this shit anymore it is what it is the outcome will speak for itself

[Row]

LOL stick together crysis and bluntman

lmao

[ViTRiOL]

ViTRiOL's backed into a corner now so he goes offline

If he even has the audacity to explain how the 2nd half of the opposing verse was better than my 2nd half it'll be some sig worthy shit

im out. aint speakin on this shit anymore it is what it is the outcome will speak for itself

I got life to be living, I'm not a hate-addled internet gremlin like yourself. Take a look out the window.

Even F Word admitted it, you had a verse full of played shit. As did Rican's. This is how you'll know it's not even a dickride vote: Re-reading, I feel like the ratings should even be a 7 or a high 6.

First, lol @ Rican’s outfits.. This nigga shops for SPANDEX-n-WEAVES. Rarely SCANNIN’em JEANS only buys em if he can’t fit his HAND in BETWEEN & they barely EXPAND at THE KNEES.

Funny but without any impact. Then there's this old ass shit:

Ironic we’re ‘In Store: for da Win-doe’ like when MANNEQUINS SEEN.

Honestly, window/win doe? How you expecting to win a battle taking notes from The Book of Letsbeef's Nursery Rhymes? Jaded and outdated shit there.

So why attack the Godly-&-our-set when we’ve caught more ‘bodies-on-the-net’ than a HAMMOCK IN TREES!

Another basic bar. Everyone is guilty of using this overused concept, so needless to say I'd have expected more from Pulse.

Ya’ll aint real-fake’s inside-of-you. .& fuck ya ‘trans mission’ cuz “Wheel brake-n-tire-crews” like novice me-CHANICS IN TEAMS.

More amateur-esque wordplay. Slipped in quick, haphazard and rushed. Ruined the readability and conceptual credibility.

Fidel’s verse gon be ass so like mutes bumpin Rock-&-Roll-music who’ll go FRANTIC-n-SCREAM? Cuz the God-could-flow-stupid! Rican? Drop-the-whole-crew-binge cuz you’ve ‘started-more-movements’ than a DANCING ROUTINE!

Incredibly predictable and basic, although underneath the facade of a complex bar. This is where my verdict comes into play.

& Only way Fidel “wood punch, impactful” is w/ the HANDS of BRUCE LEE.

More wordplay that doesn't work both ways, grammatical error tars the whole point of the wordplay in the first place. Illo will say this himself, but main voters aren't looking for detail. I voted against your verse because at the core, technique and punch clarity lacked. I can name even more technical faults throughout the verse:

"Buy Bull you say", Like when a CHRISTIAN WORSHIPS SATAN

"Indian(/In the End?); Ya Tribe Utter Failures" - shaking my head, Manny

After 3 years u "Figure it'd Stick, Man", Like SIGNATURES OF CAVEMEN - Sloppy, nonsensical broken double entendre

"Little dickheads fucking force" like the most INSECURE OF RAPISTS - Forced wording.

So here were your best two concepts:

(1) cuz writing ya OWN material is about as "Alien to yall" as VISITORS IN SPACESHIPS & it'll get "Syria's if we Tally Bans"..on some PRISONER EXCHANGE SHIT

(2) Your ‘clique getting dragged’, and ‘assed out’ like porn when we SCAN-for-NUDE SCENES.

Buuuuut both were executed poorly due to (1)'s wordplay issues, with it being slightly off-key with the initial sentence structure. Syria's/Serious wordplay is almost considered overused at this point, nigh-on played. The actual bar overall was well structured but execution, the point at where it matters most, made that obsolete.

(2) was formulated as a jab, swagger was very much on point but you tarred it with "assed out" which, in my eyes, threw away the clean wording factor.

With this being said, I could shed the same amount of negative criticism about Rican's and Fidel's verse. Both verses very much had played and forced concepts, at times even being nonsensical:

when he P.M'S THE FOLKS that this ''G NEED THE VOTE'' (Genie Devote) You-squeeze? I'll give you a ''two-piece'' without biKINIS IN VOGUE!! - Too simplistic, no impact.

MY CLIPS OUT? We'll "cast a spell, on Manhattan" and we ain't NY WITCH SCOUTS!! - Quoting F Word and myself: "What the fuck is an NY witch scout?", nonsensical/forced

Legion LACKS ARTIST therefor we set up an "organ: iced crime" like the Eskimo BLACK MARKET!!! - Forced with an awkward/played wordplay

That being said, they had a higher density of "punches". Or, as I'd put it in my beneath-the-surface patronising manner, semi-impactful sentence resolutions. How condescending does that sound? They had more flips, more direction towards the opponent (sacrificing build-ups for this) and more, afraid to say it, semi-impactful sentence resolutions than your verse.

The reason you have a majority of votes is due to the polish and superficial readability to your verse. Is that a invalid reason to vote for you? No. When I vote, I don't always have an absolute conviction that everyone should vote my way. It's subjective and momentarily influenced. I felt like there was more core battling adherence in Rican and Fidel Z's verse. My original vote half-way through your verse was that of LoD, but I felt like I slowly began to realise that it was just a well-structured verse with a slight comic value and little text battling novelty.

There's your expo. Please respect it, however if you do want to troll some more then just bear in mind that you can't slander my vote any longer. Illo's vote goes to show that it was close. Saying it's a landslide is just egotistical.

Take it easy, Sir Pulse.

---------- Post added at 12:54 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:49 AM ----------

Godbody Manhattan Rican Fidel Z FiNAL WoRD

[FiNAL WoRD]

BarzILLA ive voted on every battled link with my name

[ViTRiOL]

BarzILLA ive voted on every battled link with my name

Da fuck are you talking or smoking?

[Fidel Z]

I got life to be living, I'm not a hate-addled internet gremlin like yourself. Take a look out the window.

Even F Word admitted it, you had a verse full of played shit. As did Rican's. This is how you'll know it's not even a dickride vote: Re-reading, I feel like the ratings should even be a 7 or a high 6.

First, lol @ Rican’s outfits.. This nigga shops for SPANDEX-n-WEAVES. Rarely SCANNIN’em JEANS only buys em if he can’t fit his HAND in BETWEEN & they barely EXPAND at THE KNEES.

Funny but without any impact. Then there's this old ass shit:

Ironic we’re ‘In Store: for da Win-doe’ like when MANNEQUINS SEEN.

Honestly, window/win doe? How you expecting to win a battle taking notes from The Book of Letsbeef's Nursery Rhymes? Jaded and outdated shit there.

So why attack the Godly-&-our-set when we’ve caught more ‘bodies-on-the-net’ than a HAMMOCK IN TREES!

Another basic bar. Everyone is guilty of using this overused concept, so needless to say I'd have expected more from Pulse.

Ya’ll aint real-fake’s inside-of-you. .& fuck ya ‘trans mission’ cuz “Wheel brake-n-tire-crews” like novice me-CHANICS IN TEAMS.

More amateur-esque wordplay. Slipped in quick, haphazard and rushed. Ruined the readability and conceptual credibility.

Fidel’s verse gon be ass so like mutes bumpin Rock-&-Roll-music who’ll go FRANTIC-n-SCREAM? Cuz the God-could-flow-stupid! Rican? Drop-the-whole-crew-binge cuz you’ve ‘started-more-movements’ than a DANCING ROUTINE!

Incredibly predictable and basic, although underneath the facade of a complex bar. This is where my verdict comes into play.

& Only way Fidel “wood punch, impactful” is w/ the HANDS of BRUCE LEE.

More wordplay that doesn't work both ways, grammatical error tars the whole point of the wordplay in the first place. Illo will say this himself, but main voters aren't looking for detail. I voted against your verse because at the core, technique and punch clarity lacked. I can name even more technical faults throughout the verse:

"Buy Bull you say", Like when a CHRISTIAN WORSHIPS SATAN

"Indian(/In the End?); Ya Tribe Utter Failures" - shaking my head, Manny

After 3 years u "Figure it'd Stick, Man", Like SIGNATURES OF CAVEMEN - Sloppy, nonsensical broken double entendre

"Little dickheads fucking force" like the most INSECURE OF RAPISTS - Forced wording.

So here were your best two concepts:

(1) cuz writing ya OWN material is about as "Alien to yall" as VISITORS IN SPACESHIPS & it'll get "Syria's if we Tally Bans"..on some PRISONER EXCHANGE SHIT

(2) Your ‘clique getting dragged’, and ‘assed out’ like porn when we SCAN-for-NUDE SCENES.

Buuuuut both were executed poorly due to (1)'s wordplay issues, with it being slightly off-key with the initial sentence structure. Syria's/Serious wordplay is almost considered overused at this point, nigh-on played. The actual bar overall was well structured but execution, the point at where it matters most, made that obsolete.

(2) was formulated as a jab, swagger was very much on point but you tarred it with "assed out" which, in my eyes, threw away the clean wording factor.

With this being said, I could shed the same amount of negative criticism about Rican's and Fidel's verse. Both verses very much had played and forced concepts, at times even being nonsensical:

when he P.M'S THE FOLKS that this ''G NEED THE VOTE'' (Genie Devote) You-squeeze? I'll give you a ''two-piece'' without biKINIS IN VOGUE!! - Too simplistic, no impact.

MY CLIPS OUT? We'll "cast a spell, on Manhattan" and we ain't NY WITCH SCOUTS!! - Quoting F Word and myself: "What the fuck is an NY witch scout?", nonsensical/forced

Legion LACKS ARTIST therefor we set up an "organ: iced crime" like the Eskimo BLACK MARKET!!! - Forced with an awkward/played wordplay

That being said, they had a higher density of "punches". Or, as I'd put it in my beneath-the-surface patronising manner, semi-impactful sentence resolutions. How condescending does that sound? They had more flips, more direction towards the opponent (sacrificing build-ups for this) and more, afraid to say it, semi-impactful sentence resolutions than your verse.

The reason you have a majority of votes is due to the polish and superficial readability to your verse. Is that a invalid reason to vote for you? No. When I vote, I don't always have an absolute conviction that everyone should vote my way. It's subjective and momentarily influenced. I felt like there was more core battling adherence in Rican and Fidel Z's verse. My original vote half-way through your verse was that of LoD, but I felt like I slowly began to realise that it was just a well-structured verse with a slight comic value and little text battling novelty.

There's your expo. Please respect it, however if you do want to troll some more then just bear in mind that you can't slander my vote any longer. Illo's vote goes to show that it was close. Saying it's a landslide is just egotistical.

Take it easy, Sir Pulse.

---------- Post added at 12:54 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:49 AM ----------

Godbody Manhattan Rican Fidel Z FiNAL WoRD

Lmaooo you ain't playing games!

[Godbody]

LOL @ ViTRiOL

You just made yourself look like a clown. i asked you specifically to ask how the 2nd half of the other verse matched up against mine/was superior and you quote one bar from it, a forced wordplay at that, and cite that as one of the bars behind your reasoning/'impeccable judgment' that you said you had earlier. what a fuckin dumbass


the beginning of my bars were a build up to a punch attacking Rican's sexuality and it was worded cleverly with everything being relevent to the punch..'started more movements than a DANCING ROUTINE'...'caught more bodies on the net' HAMMOCK IN TREES......the 'trans mission 'Wheel brake n tire crews' is a 3 way wordplay...

We'll break entire
Wheel brake n tire
We'll break n tire ...as is 'I'm tired'

The Bruce Lee punch, the Porn video punch - again...Multis were strung together in a fluent way that reads like a sentence & they were still punches whether you consider them punches or not

now count the amount of wordplays that are as complex as mine and count the amount of readable punches with a solid flow from the opposition where it corresponds to my half of the verse in that 32 line text box that landed in comparison to some of the more complex lines I had structurally

THAT is how you analyze a verse.. Do the same for my opponent and take my cizzock out ya mizzouth

how you gonna try to bullshit a bullshitter b?
stupid fuckin filth vanish from my presence the God has spoken

[Hubert Cumberdale]

3 way word plays are fucking dreadful.

[Godbody]

Dreadful or not I can't stand bullshitters that use bullshit logic in an attempt to justify a ridiculous act or claim.

[Hubert Cumberdale]

For the record, your line have been dope, I only replied to the last line.

[Godbody]

Appreciated

ViTRiOL - get the fuck outta here son

i honestly didnt know you existed prior to voting on my battle but u lost my respect home girl
you'll manage to cope eventually

& your reasoning behind my failed wordplay is that it was haphazard rushed and the readability was ruined

No

"Fuck your transmission"..."Wheel brake n tire crews" like novice mechanics in teams

That's 2 wordplays and 2 concepts transmission works in the car & sexuality sense and the Wheel brake works in the car & its other sense

Your counter-argument would be "you can't wheel break n tire crews".. All i woulda had to do was add "Cuz WE Wheel brake n tire crews' for it to have the readibility you wanted but I figured you text faggots knew what I was sayin & wouldnt be anal

your best bar aint fuckin with my medium effort ones b fuck outta here

[RULE]

lol Vitty get em

[J u s T C]

vit wrote all that for nothing/

[NatsHubby]

3 way word plays are fucking dreadful.

they having sex with Mani Mula?

[Mani Mula]

they having sex with Mani Mula?

Your 15secs of Fame is Over Kid Illmania will be over soon and we all are soon to forget that little stunt u pulled...

Please dont post a Video battle Burning My Photo's or a Murda Muzik Crew Logo...:fyou:

[GRizzEAT]

and niggas wonder why i jus vote for maself..:high:

[Babylon]

^Lmaoo

[Godbody]

and niggas wonder why i jus vote for maself..:high:

You still do

[GRizzEAT]

.... that was kinda tha original punchline.. :o

[Wizdumb]

I aint takin no sides, but ever since this fair voting thread turned 'Universal' nobody but 2FUEL votes

Theres alot of complaining in the thread but theres good reason too it, I havent got a single vote on any of my last 15-20 battles I had tagged/posted in the threads

Now you all could say you dont vote because you dont like me, which contradicts yall job, I dont like 90% of the dudes battles I vote on but without voting = no credits AND a dead website

Your bars are garbage. All you do is snipe shitty beginners and go for the easy Ws...... Why should we take the time to read and critique your content when you dont even give a fuck enough to put any effort into writing it..??

I have 20+ links in my 'voted thread' and i didnt start posting in it til the second week of June.... Im just not reading your trash until i see you start taking on some better competition and actually trying.

:high:

[GRizzEAT]

such wizdom..:high:

[Row]

Your bars are garbage. All you do is snipe shitty beginners and go for the easy Ws...... Why should we take the time to read and critique your content when you dont even give a fuck enough to put any effort into writing it..??

I have 20+ links in my 'voted thread' and i didnt start posting in it til the second week of June.... Im just not reading your trash until i see you start taking on some better competition and actually trying.

:high:

change your name to wisdom fa this

[ViTRiOL]

Appreciated

ViTRiOL - get the fuck outta here son

i honestly didnt know you existed prior to voting on my battle but u lost my respect home girl
you'll manage to cope eventually

& your reasoning behind my failed wordplay is that it was haphazard rushed and the readability was ruined

No

"Fuck your transmission"..."Wheel brake n tire crews" like novice mechanics in teams

That's 2 wordplays and 2 concepts transmission works in the car & sexuality sense and the Wheel brake works in the car & its other sense

Your counter-argument would be "you can't wheel break n tire crews".. All i woulda had to do was add "Cuz WE Wheel brake n tire crews' for it to have the readibility you wanted but I figured you text faggots knew what I was sayin & wouldnt be anal

your best bar aint fuckin with my medium effort ones b fuck outta here

All I see is period blood.

Take it on the chin like your mother does at work.

---------- Post added at 05:57 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:54 PM ----------

On a side-note, are you blind?

Ya’ll aint real-fake’s inside-of-you. .& fuck ya ‘trans mission’ cuz “Wheel brake-n-tire-crews” like novice me-CHANICS IN TEAMS.

Because wheel break n' tire crews.

Yeah, makes so much sense as a sentence.

Because wheel break n' tire crews.

That's like 4chan fags saying, "I like this because tits."

Please go and hop in a time machine to 2014 you outdated deluded little bitch.

---------- Post added at 05:59 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:57 PM ----------

Plus that line is overstretched. What more can I say to stop this dude from fucking his own ass?

By all means send if you want to talk more shit. Make sure it's a box of punches, not a carton of your period blood.

[Skizzo]

We'll break Entire Crews.

Wheel Brake n' Tire Crews.


That doesnt work as a sentence Vit?....... Oronyms anybody? Lol.




Anyways....
"Welcome Back Skizzo!" <-- Yeah fuck you too sluts. Sup pulSe, You salty bitch you. Some people just don't like some shit YOU might think is hot fire. You're winning anyways. Let the votes speak for themselves.


How do I know all of this? Because.... Skizzo's Watching.... And he knows things.

[Babylon]

Tbh you can just keep going, all Godbody is going to do it troll reply but it's funny to watch you make him look like an idiot so by all means continue.

[Fidel Z]

Lmao! Godbody been sonnin Crysis for so long he's using vitty to get back at em. Weak.

[ViTRiOL]

We'll break Entire Crews.

Wheel Brake n' Tire Crews.


That doesnt work as a sentence Vit?....... Oronyms anybody? Lol.




Anyways....
"Welcome Back Skizzo!" <-- Yeah fuck you too sluts. Sup pulSe, You salty bitch you. Some people just don't like some shit YOU might think is hot fire. You're winning anyways. Let the votes speak for themselves.


How do I know all of this? Because.... Skizzo's Watching.... And he knows things.

Does no-one understand two-way wordplay anymore?

Because we'll break entire crews. That's fine.

Because wheel break n' tire crews. No.

Understand now?

[Godbody]

ViTRiOL is so stupid he doesn't even know what a wordplay is

Wheel brake n tire crews = Novice mechanics..Get it? Because they'd be working on engines and transmissions and other shit if they were experienced

We'll break entire crews = Exactly what it looks like
We'll break & tire crews = Exactly what it looks like

& Crysis is so mad he got fucked by LoD he's backing up illogical arguments like a cheer leader. Either that or Crysis fails to comprehend how wordplays work too


Waddup Skizzo ...These novice niggas think they can tell ME about wordplay LOL

[Babylon]

Lmao! Godbody been sonnin Crysis for so long he's using vitty to get back at em. Weak.

Get out of here Fidel, you are literally letsbeefs hypeman. The biggest thing you're known for is saying "LMAOOO" when someone comments. Godbody sons himself with every post, I don't reply because I know it's a troll (Thank to Davey) Are you saying not replying to trolls is being sonned?

If so, promptly self immolate you Lil Wayne cosplaying faggot.

[ViTRiOL]

ViTRiOL is so stupid he doesn't even know what a wordplay is

Wheel brake n tire crews = Car concept
We'll break entire crews = Exactly what it looks like
We'll break & tire crews = Exactly what it looks like

& Crysis is so mad he got fucked by LoD he's backing up illogical arguments like a cheer leader. Either that or Crysis fails to comprehend how wordplays work too


Waddup Skizzo ...These novice niggas think they can tell ME about wordplay LOL

You're in intense denial, Pulsey.

It's grammatically wrong you fucking invalid. Stop trying to get away with that ghettonese shit.

---------- Post added at 06:22 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:21 PM ----------

I said it already.

Because we'll break entire crews. Well done, round of applause.

Because wheel break n' tire crews. Now grab a textbook and drink your milk.

[ViTRiOL]

This is why EtH has always been a better troll, pULSe constantly loses his shit. At least Dave keeps his toys in his pram. Tuck those nuts into your nappy you grumpy giblet.

[Godbody]

I'm like 5 steps ahead of you ViTRiOL. Again, you're backed into a corner

I already pointed out that it'd be grammatically flawless if I put "WE" before wheel

Cuz we "Wheel brake n tire crews"

& I also pointed out that I didn't know text faggots would be so ANAL about a missing word that doesn't even affect the concept or the wordplay. You all got exactly what I was sayin but grammar nazi ViTRiOL wants to pick and choose what to scrutinize to plead his bullshit case (you're the only vet on the site with that opinion btw) as if I can't go into ViTRiOL's battles and call him out on shit and pick it apart

But I don't do that because I'm not a faggot or an English professor.

I'm like 4-0 against you in this thread

All you do is try incredibly hard to sound intelligent with every post but you post some nonsensical bullshit that I absolutely debunk & demolish with every post

Keep it comin though :popcorn:

I love it when dumbasses defend a losing argument.

[ViTRiOL]

I'm like 5 steps ahead of you ViTRiOL. Again, you're backed into a corner

I already pointed out that it'd be grammatically flawless if I put "WE" before wheel

Cuz we "Wheel brake n tire crews"

& I also pointed out that I didn't know text faggots would be so ANAL about a missing word that doesn't even affect the concept or the wordplay. You all got exactly what I was sayin but grammar nazi ViTRiOL wants to pick and choose what to scrutinize to plead his bullshit case (you're the only vet on the site with that opinion btw) as if I can't go into ViTRiOL's battles and call him out on shit and pick it apart

But I don't do that because I'm not a faggot or an English professor.

It's an imperfect bar. Just let it go little man.

Because we wheel brake n' tire crews. Even worse. Sit down, shut up, doodle some vascular dicks like you did in school.

And I'm cracking up at your reasoning for not picking apart my battles, you've never been righteous, haha. Snakiest dude on LB can't even have a go at me. I'm disappointed in you.

Dave, it's official. pULSe is several stories below you.

[Fidel Z]

Get out of here Fidel, you are literally letsbeefs hypeman. The biggest thing you're known for is saying "LMAOOO" when someone comments. Godbody sons himself with every post, I don't reply because I know it's a troll (Thank to Davey) Are you saying not replying to trolls is being sonned?

If so, promptly self immolate you Lil Wayne cosplaying faggot.

LOL Chill out. I'm just playing with you. I don't want beef with chloroformers.

[Babylon]

Are you saying that "and tire" and "entire" works Godbody or am I missing something?

[Mani Mula]

You're in intense denial, Pulsey.

It's grammatically wrong you fucking invalid. Stop trying to get away with that ghettonese shit.

---------- Post added at 06:22 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:21 PM ----------

I said it already.

Because we'll break entire crews. Well done, round of applause.

Because wheel break n' tire crews. Now grab a textbook and drink your milk.

Can you give us a Example of how you would have Executed this Punch? Cuz I honestly see nothing wrong with it and Im from the Other team

[ViTRiOL]

Are you saying that "and tire" and "entire" works Godbody or am I missing something?

He's saying that "Because wheel break n' tire crews." is fine and that "Because we wheel break n' tire crews." is grammatically flawless.

He clearly doesn't understand what I mean. His wordplay is still stone age.

He's panicking now, what was that corner you were talking about, P?

[Babylon]

LOL Chill out. I'm just playing with you. I don't want beef with chloroformers.

You do know I could accept the MM invite I got from Grizz, come to your crew, and with the quickness be in a higher position than you, right?

[Skizzo]

The problem is you're missing commas Vit. Grammatically speaking..

"Our entire team is made up of Wheel, Brake and Tire Crews."

^ That is a correctly formed sentence. No matter which way you look at it. Now... I don't want to be on some white knight shit, but you're wrong pimp. Sorry.


Other than that though.. It's your opinion, I can't say whether it's hot or not, THAT is opinion but when it's a question of correct sentence grammar or not, well... we can measure that right? that's actual FACT. So yeah, you're wrong there. lol

Anyways... Been a while huh PulSe. You still being a bitch, as always I see lol. What's new around here though?

[Dean]

Lol Vit going to have to make a 'how to use wordplay' thread.

[Godbody]

ViTRiOL has to be a 300 pound virgin ..this nigga macked his hand and they've been in a steady relationship since he hit puberty lol

Here's a ViTRiOL bar

I'm in the "Running to Catch a Body", I got the FINESSE TO BREAK HIS REGIMEN so watch me put an "End to this Streak" like the ARREST OF NAKED REVELLERS!


REGIMEN rhymes with REVELLERS?

Yo ViTRiOL you trippin me out with every post...What planet you on when you decide to let nonsense escape your fingers?

Skizzo, Mani, Dave, Man..several other vets

How many more niggas need to chime in before you realize how stupid you look?

[ViTRiOL]

Can you give us a Example of how you would have Executed this Punch? Cuz I honestly see nothing wrong with it and Im from the Other team

Why do I have to? If it's an imperfect bar then I obviously would have taken a different approach to constructing it.

Because wheel brake n' tire crews/because we'll break entire crews isn't a perfect wordplay, it works one way.

How about:

Y'all know about us? Doom straight down to "break entire crews" w/o a NEED TO FIX THE WHIP

That's better at least.

Doom straight down to break n' crews/Doom straight down to break entire crews.

It's just about thinking both ways.

[Fidel Z]

You do know I could accept the MM invite I got from Grizz, come to your crew, and with the quickness be in a higher position than you, right?

Higher position than me? So you'll be a MM leader? LOL behave yourself.

And Grizz knows better.

[ViTRiOL]

The problem is you're missing commas Vit. Grammatically speaking..

"Our entire team is made up of Wheel, Brake and Tire Crews."

^ That is a correctly formed sentence. No matter which way you look at it. Now... I don't want to be on some white knight shit, but you're wrong pimp. Sorry.


Other than that though.. It's your opinion, I can't say whether it's hot or not, THAT is opinion but when it's a question of correct sentence grammar or not, well... we can measure that right? that's actual FACT. So yeah, you're wrong there. lol

Anyways... Been a while huh PulSe. You still being a bitch, as always I see lol. What's new around here though?

Jesus Christ, can't anyone understand this utterly simple concept?

Because we'll break entire crews. It works as a sentence.

Because wheel break n' tire crews. NO. It doesn't make sense.

Refer to my tutorial, maybe pULSe'll learn something from it.

[Godbody]

Why do I have to? If it's an imperfect bar then I obviously would have taken a different approach to constructing it.

Because wheel brake n' tire crews/because we'll break entire crews isn't a perfect wordplay, it works one way.

How about:

Y'all know about us? Doom straight down to "break entire crews" w/o a NEED TO FIX THE WHIP

That's better at least.

Doom straight down to break n' crews/Doom straight down to break entire crews.

It's just about thinking both ways.

That makes absolutely 0 sense

So you can brake & tire crews without the need to fix the whip? How does that work again ViTRiOL?

You could brake and tire a CAR
You can't brake and tire a CREW without the need to fix a whip

This is some of the best comedic relief on here in a while

[Mani Mula]

In hip hop everything aint grammatically correct

Slang aint Proper English Rappers never Had Proper English

Wheel/ We'll Break/Brake N Tire(Entire) Crews

In ebonics "And" is Commonly replaced by "N" and saying N Tire sounds just like Entire

Let the Bar Slide Its Much Better then the Sloppy wordplay displayed here

[Babylon]

The problem is you're missing commas Vit. Grammatically speaking..

"Our entire team is made up of Wheel, Brake and Tire Crews."

^ That is a correctly formed sentence. No matter which way you look at it. Now... I don't want to be on some white knight shit, but you're wrong pimp. Sorry.


Other than that though.. It's your opinion, I can't say whether it's hot or not, THAT is opinion but when it's a question of correct sentence grammar or not, well... we can measure that right? that's actual FACT. So yeah, you're wrong there. lol

Anyways... Been a while huh PulSe. You still being a bitch, as always I see lol. What's new around here though?

Not that I'm in this, but I'd like to input my opinion:

Wordplay works with multiple meanings, not just one.

While "Our entire team is made up of Wheel, brake and Tire crews" does work (Even though it is completely irrelevant to fuck all, and just looks fucking retarded. I mean, who the fuck says "Yeaaa shun ma squad fulla mechanics"?

It's double meaning doesn't work in the slightest:

"Our entire team is made up of we'll break entire crews"

That doesn't work at all. Not to mention "and tire" and "entire" also is broken as fuck. The bar is hella ill-structured in multiple ways.

[ViTRiOL]

ViTRiOL has to be a 300 pound virgin ..this nigga macked his hand and they've been in a steady relationship since he hit puberty lol

Here's a ViTRiOL bar

I'm in the "Running to Catch a Body", I got the FINESSE TO BREAK HIS REGIMEN so watch me put an "End to this Streak" like the ARREST OF NAKED REVELLERS!


REGIMEN rhymes with REVELLERS?

Yo ViTRiOL you trippin me out with every post...What planet you on when you decide to let nonsense escape your fingers?

Skizzo, Mani, Dave, Man..several other vets

How many more niggas need to chime in before you realize how stupid you look?

Yeah, I'll admit that was a forced rhyme. True say.

Maturity Battle:

ViTRiOL 1 - Pulse 0

---------- Post added at 06:37 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:36 PM ----------

That makes absolutely 0 sense

So you can brake & tire crews without the need to fix the whip? How does that work again ViTRiOL?

You could brake and tire a CAR
You can't brake and tire a CREW without the need to fix a whip

This is some of the best comedic relief on here in a while

It works both ways and it was an example. I managed to make sevenfold more sense that you using five seconds of brain activity.

[Godbody]

Crysis still doesn't understand that the 'n' in "Wheel-break-n-tire-crews" is like saying AND

n = &

Like Shake 'n Bake

People call it Shake AND Bake all the time

But if you read the box the brandname is 'Shake 'n Bake' ...with the understanding that the consumer realizes contraction letter n ('n) is slang for AND

& ViTRiOL

Y'all know about us? Doom straight down to "break entire crews" w/o a NEED TO FIX THE WHIP

^ Still doesn't make sense

How do you break & tire a crew without the need to fix the whip? Or how do you break entire crews without the need to fix a whip? LOL


You're reaching & those concepts are so unrelated it'd be the equivalent of me saying

You'll get 'popped' like bubble gum on the 4th of July!

what the fuck does gum have to do with the 4th of July? lmfao

let daddy teach you about wordplay

I've won more battles than you've probably done TOTAL by using it

we can argue all day about how to make it a perfect wordplay the fact of the matter is your version is a watered down, much shittier example, that is incorrect because it only makes sense with 1 meaning

mine makes sense 3 different ways but because I forgot the word "we" its grammatically incorrect

yeaa..you bit the bullet on this one son. Step ya wordplay up

[ViTRiOL]

Ya’ll aint real-fake’s inside-of-you. .& fuck ya ‘trans mission’ cuz “Wheel brake-n-tire-crews” like novice me-CHANICS IN TEAMS.

Godbody - how can you break entire crews like novice mechanics in teams?

It doesn't matter because it's a conceptual flip. Now you're just abandoning text battling criteria completely with that hypocrisy. I was right to vote against you, you're embarrassing your tag mate, your crew and Letsbeef.

Keep talking yo.

[Skizzo]

Well, to each his own opinion Vit. I respectfully disagree, but then again.. that's your vote and your opinion pimpin.



And PulSe admits that IM a vet? Wow... Who saw that shit coming? LOL.

[ViTRiOL]

Several people have already agreed with me. Dean says I should do a wordplay thread for this chump, I pretty much have and he's so egotistically blinded by denial that it's pointless.

Just send you fucking punk.

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Well, to each his own opinion Vit. I respectfully disagree, but then again.. that's your vote and your opinion pimpin.



And PulSe admits that IM a vet? Wow... Who saw that shit coming? LOL.

It's not opinion-based. It has to work both ways as a sentence.

Are you telling me that "Because wheel break n' tire crews" works as a natural sentence. I'm not beefing. Thanks for reading my view.

[Dean]

In hip hop everything aint grammatically correct

Slang aint Proper English Rappers never Had Proper English

Wheel/ We'll Break/Brake N Tire(Entire) Crews

In ebonics "And" is Commonly replaced by "N" and saying N Tire sounds just like Entire

Let the Bar Slide Its Much Better then the Sloppy wordplay displayed here

The n-tire/entire isn't the problem, that's fine. The problem is the wordplay has to make sense both ways in the sentence.

[Godbody]

It is opinion based and you're a funny faggot

Exactly what you're doing to my wordplay is what I did to your revision

You can't break & tire a crew without the need to fix a whip

^ Its a solid attempt but no cigar

Like I said I can be a faggot with my dick tucked in between my legs like ViT and pick and choose what to scrutinize all day if I voted for the inferior verse and made ludicrous claims like Vit

I chose to pick and scrutinize your revised version of my bar, which doesn't make sense.

ViT - "how can you break entire crews like novice mechanics in teams?"

^ Point made. You overlooked it and I pointed it out in your rewritten bar then you go back to the original bar to further scrutinize it and plead your case

Shit faggots do

Take it easy home girl

1 day you'll be on my level but its not anytime soon and as far as audio you'll never be on my level so quit while you're ahead

[Dean]

Well tough-shit, fuck-kid my RHMYES TOO DOPE/ I wouldn't have a kid jack-it with a SIZE TWO COAT!

Well tough-shit, fuck-kid my RHYMES TOO DOPE/ I wouldn't have a kid jacket with a SIZE TWO COAT!

[ViTRiOL]

Y'all know about us? Doom straight down to "break entire crews" w/o a NEED TO FIX THE WHIP

^ Still doesn't make sense

How do you break & tire a crew without the need to fix the whip? Or how do you break entire crews without the need to fix a whip?

Okay, let's put a nail in this coffin.

By that logic, you're saying it should work both ways conceptually as well: Remember, the flip is implied when utilising a double entendre, not DIRECT.

Ya’ll aint real-fake’s inside-of-you. .& fuck ya ‘trans mission’ cuz “Wheel brake-n-tire-crews” like novice me-CHANICS IN TEAMS

This isn't me questioning you, this is your criticism broadcasted on your own bar.

How do you break entire crews like mechanics in teams? That's not directly clear. Oh yeah, that's because it's a concept flip.

Just like my example except it works both ways grammatically as a natural sentence.

Correct/Incorrect

"Straight down to break entire crews/Straight down to break n' tire crews"

"Because we'll break entire crews/Because wheel brake n' tire crews"


Anyone with half a brain will understand this.

[Godbody]

Well tough-shit, fuck-kid my RHMYES TOO DOPE/ I wouldn't have a kid jack-it with a SIZE TWO COAT!

Well tough-shit, fuck-kid my RHYMES TOO DOPE/ I wouldn't have a kid jacket with a SIZE TWO COAT!

Dean fail

You just finished saying a wordplay has to make sense when read both ways

How can a kid jack it with a SIZE TWO COAT?

Jacket & Size 2 coat is the concept and it makes sense conceptually. not grammatically or in literary terms

but now everything goes back to my original point

Stop being anal faggots about every single word placement because we can scrutinize each other's shit all day and never agree on anything

[Skizzo]

Nah, I just think the wordplay itself has to work both ways, not necessarily be a full gramatically perfect sentence. Because in that aspect, neither ways work because a gramatically formed sentence cant start with "because".



Way I seen the wordplay.... "Wheel Brake & Tire crews" stands on it's own legs. It's the oronym in itself that makes sence.


We will break entire crews, and wheel brake and tire crews. Now I know what you're referring to as well, when you use homonyms and homophones, I think that's the more traditional way to do it when you try to formulate the sentence concept to work. some wack shit but like "blue ya shot" like a smurf in a shooting range. <-- That would work both ways because of the homophone used. but when you use an oronym, it's tricky because they don't work the same way homophones work, seeing as phonetically it changes the entire sentence itself.

"The Stuff He Knows can be dangerous."
"The Stuffy Nose can be dangerous."

^ See what I mean? So obviously when using an oronym like that, it would change the sentence formation and concept itself to be something entirely different.... but that's what oronyms do.


Just saying.... You don't have to think it's "Hot", Or "Dope", but... Gramatically.... PulSe is right.... ON THAT SINGLE CONCEPT anyways... And I don't think i've ever said those words before.


Excuse me while I bleach my mouth out and kill myself now. lol.

[CakedOut]

Niggas cry like kids.

This deserves a temporary ban. Maybe 2-3 day ban.
Who creates a thread in the Public lounge.. not text.
get this fagget the fuck outta here

[ViTRiOL]

This hasn't been an argument, Pulse. This has been an epic battle to try make you see sense. I have failed, your stupidity and ignorance is too strong. Dean is attempting like the brave knight he is but we are falling weak and shattered at the flames of this MIGHTY RETARD DEMON. THE DRAGON OF DENIAL HAS SLAIN US. SLAIN US I TELL YE.

Thank you, Dean. Someone actually knows what wordplay is.

On another side-note, Pulse has avoided my request to send bars twice now. I rest my case.

[Godbody]

lol @ ViTRiOL saying he understands what wordplay is then agreeing that Dean had a solid wordplay

So both of you explain to me how Dean's wordplay makes sense when read both ways

I'm trying to learn how to jack it with a size 2 coat, yo

[ViTRiOL]

Nah, I just think the wordplay itself has to work both ways, not necessarily be a full gramatically perfect sentence. Because in that aspect, neither ways work because a gramatically formed sentence cant start with "because".



Way I seen the wordplay.... "Wheel Brake & Tire crews" stands on it's own legs. It's the oronym in itself that makes sence.


We will break entire crews, and wheel brake and tire crews. Now I know what you're referring to as well, when you use homonyms and homophones, I think that's the more traditional way to do it when you try to formulate the sentence concept to work. some wack shit but like "blue ya shot" like a smurf in a shooting range. <-- That would work both ways because of the homophone used. but when you use an oronym, it's tricky because they don't work the same way homophones work, seeing as phonetically it changes the entire sentence itself.

"The Stuff He Knows can be dangerous."
"The Stuffy Nose can be dangerous."

^ See what I mean? So obviously when using an oronym like that, it would change the sentence formation and concept itself to be something entirely different.... but that's what oronyms do.


Just saying.... You don't have to think it's "Hot", Or "Dope", but... Gramatically.... PulSe is right.... ON THAT SINGLE CONCEPT anyways... And I don't think i've ever said those words before.


Excuse me while I bleach my mouth out and kill myself now. lol.

That's lazy and imperfect in my opinion. I think the general consensus of accurate wordplay nowadays is that it has to work both ways as a wordplay without being forced and work in natural speech and as a grammatically correct sentence.

Oldheads are still coming around to this but I personally think it's what real skillful wordplay should be. Thanks for the input dude.

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lol @ ViTRiOL saying he understands what wordplay is then agreeing that Dean had a solid wordplay

So both of you explain to me how Dean's wordplay makes sense when read both ways

I'm trying to learn how to jack it with a size 2 coat, yo

Did I agree with the example? No. Read up proper. It makes much more sense that what you attempted however.

I am crediting Dean on his knowledge on the matter, everyone else has missed the point. Including you.

[Godbody]

ViTRiOL what the fuck do you know about a wordplay working in natural speech

If I used that bar in audio it would absolutely fuckin smash and it'd be the one everyone highlights as one of the more solid bars of the verse

it'd smash in URL, KOTD, and GT too. & don't even say it doesnt work in audio because if you thought you were iight in text listen to an audio battle from me LOL

but since its text you got ya lotion out, 5 inch thick spectacles on, and your 8th grade English book


8 pages of your bullshit rhetorical puzzling text questions all for the sake of defending your vote that no other veteran on the website agrees on

again

why the fuck is this nigga FVC

lol

[Skizzo]

That was my point... It's your "opinion" that it's lazy and imperfect, and that's fine because to each his own pimp. But if it's a matter of working gramatically as an oronym... that's fact or fiction, cuz it can actually be measured, know what I mean?


but yeah no problem. Man's verse was the hottest verse in that battle, In my opinion, I'm pretty sure that'd be an accurate enough opinion to state.

[Godbody]

I'd agree that Manhattan had a better verse than me too. If anything I'd say Manhattan's half bodied the opposin verse without mine, and mine was definitely more than good enough to beat Fidel's half, so collectively I don't see how those 2 can get it over us 2 when both of us went harder than the opposition in regards to where our verses correspond in the text box

someone tell me Rican went harder than Manhattan.. I mean thats debatable but a few forced rhymes kinda kill that for me

then someone tell me Fidel's half was harder than mine.. my first 2 lines were the only build up (what u consider filler, even though its relevant to the punch) and after that it was the same scheme and literally punch after punch with every line

the fuck are you smokin Vit

[ViTRiOL]

ViTRiOL what the fuck do you know about a wordplay working in natural speech

If I used that bar in audio it would absolutely fuckin smash and it'd be the one everyone highlights as one of the more solid bars of the verse

it'd smash in URL, KOTD, and GT too. & don't even say it doesnt work in audio because if you thought you were iight in text listen to an audio battle from me LOL

but since its text you got ya lotion out, 5 inch thick spectacles on, and your 8th grade English book


8 pages of your bullshit rhetorical puzzling text questions all for the sake of defending your vote that no other veteran on the website agrees on

again

why the fuck is this nigga FVC

lol

Go on KOTD then and stop whining on here like a faggot.

Thanks Skizzo, I'm just following what is (in my opinion) the updated consensus of what wordplay should be.

---------- Post added at 07:05 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:04 PM ----------

I'd agree that Manhattan had a better verse than me too. If anything I'd say Manhattan's half bodied the opposin verse without mine, and mine was definitely more than good enough to beat Fidel's half, so collectively I don't see how those 2 can get it over us 2 when both of us went harder than the opposition in regards to where our verses correspond in the text box

You're going to get banned for swaying if you carry on, not my doing or intention dude. You're going to win the battle and Manhattan said you're embarrassing him so how about calming down before you become the Letsbeef Dunce again.

[Godbody]

You don't know what the updated consensus is cuz the vets still run you lil niggas

You win a tournament that nobody good participates in and you're feelin yourself

lmao

[Mani Mula]

Exactly Wordplay stand on its own not the Whole sentence

Alot of wordplays wouldnt make sense if the whole sentence had to be Grammatically Correct

If u notice when Battle rappers do Wordplay they ONLY put Emphasis on the Wordplay Part to bring only that part attention Not the Sentence

Yall tryna judge too damn hard no wonder nun on the hotlist dont got 5 star shit

[Godbody]

I aint swayin. Didnt this thread become about personal opinions? I'm sharing mine

The writing is on the wall for our battle and its as plain as day. I don't have to bump threads to get votes, I don't have to convince everyone on LetsBeef that the sky is blue

This is me asking for a break down of your vote & you've yet to properly defend your case

& This is the majority of the site tellin YOU how wordplay works

You know, accomplished vets, HOF status niggas that have been in HOF crews

You probably just started rappin like 2 years ago prior to that you were reading Harry Potter and playing Warcraft...so I see why you're so obsessed with everything being grammatically correct

but this is fuckin Hip-Hop not a course from Merriam Webster

[Fidel Z]

I'd agree that Manhattan had a better verse than me too. If anything I'd say Manhattan's half bodied the opposin verse without mine, and mine was definitely more than good enough to beat Fidel's half, so collectively I don't see how those 2 can get it over us 2 when both of us went harder than the opposition in regards to where our verses correspond in the text box

someone tell me Rican went harder than Manhattan.. I mean thats debatable but a few forced rhymes kinda kill that for me

then someone tell me Fidel's half was harder than mine.. my first 2 lines were the only build up (what u consider filler, even though its relevant to the punch) and after that it was the same scheme and literally punch after punch with every line

the fuck are you smokin Vit

What half are you talking about? There are no half. Shit is bar for bar. Smh

[ViTRiOL]

You don't know what the updated consensus is cuz the vets still run you lil niggas

You win a tournament that nobody good participates in and you're feelin yourself

lmao

You're a veteran, true. By that I mean old ass fuck. You're not a heavyweight, however.

It should work both ways as a wordplay and both ways as a sentence. That's real wordplay skill. I ain't even going to cuss, it's just the truth but by all means, keep trying to uphold that old school weathered style. It won't get you anywhere nowadays.

[Skizzo]

Nahhh... I wouldn't say "All Wordplays Stand on their own"... Don't confuse what i'm trynna say though homie LOL. I'm saying ORONYMS stand on their own for the most part, Homophones and homonyms are ENTIRELY different types of wordplay that involve the entire setup to be relevant to the sentence formation of the punch to be able to hit hard BOTH WAYS.


Just wanted to clarify that.. I don't want yall to run around saying "Skizzo told me so!" lmfao.


mani.

[Godbody]

copy+paste from an earlier post + edit

You probably just started rappin like 2 years ago prior to that you were reading Harry Potter and playing Warcraft...so I see why you're so obsessed with everything being grammatically correct

but this is fuckin Hip-Hop not a course from Merriam Webster. WE decide what works because Hip-Hop is based on OUR perceptions, not the perceptions of some fuckin weirdo wigger that has Shakesperian ways

thread\

[Mani Mula]

Nahhh... I wouldn't say "All Wordplays Stand on their own"... Don't confuse what i'm trynna say though homie LOL. I'm saying ORONYMS stand on their own for the most part, Homophones and homonyms are ENTIRELY different types of wordplay that involve the entire setup to be relevant to the sentence formation of the punch to be able to hit hard.


Just wanted to clarify that.. I don't want yall to run around saying "Skizzo told me so!" lmfao.


mani.

What im tryna say is people took Judging Letsbeef battles too hard

If U woulda heard these same bars in Audio U would see people react cuz they Caught it, Not going Wait "Wheel Break N Tire Crews" like Novice Mechanics? How does that Work in 2 sentences?

anybody can critique a punchline with proper English cuz raps not formed around that...

Look how deep your going into the Subject, Listening to rap battles do yall Crack out ya Webster dictionary to break down every punch? We rappers not english professors

[J u s T C]

Because wheel break n' tire crews.

Is grammatically wrong.

It wouldn't work for the play but it should be.

Because OF wheel break n' tire crews

DUE TO wheel break n' tire crews

Because THEY'RE wheel break n' tire crews

ECT

[Godbody]

No

Because we wheel brake n tire crews
Because we will break entire crews
Because we will break & tire crews

I said it from the get-go that 'we' is the missing word to make it grammatically correct but the fact of the matter is nobody has a problem with my wordplay except ViTRiOL and he's only scrutinizing it because he's been put in the unfortunate position of defending a vote that not 1 other veteran on the site agrees on

[J u s T C]

I said ect. Not tryna sit here all night typing lists. It's all the same shit.

And that in your post shows Vit is right. It's grammatically incorrect.

Not a big deal.

[Mani Mula]

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[Manhattan]

So how bout that world cup huh?

[Godbody]

how bout dem Germans b

[Skizzo]

It being an oronym makes it grammatically correct Just C.



Look it up.


And Mani, Yeah true. I think knowing about language arts helps though, I mean I would have never known to start using oronyms otherwise. I'm the type of person that likes learning different ways to rap and use / twist words. But you're correct, the average fan hears a bar / concept like that and is not going to crack open a book to figure out what type of wordplay it is and if it's works both ways and even if they pronounced it correctly most times. Rap is full of slang and slant rhymes and otherwise "grammatical imperfections", But that's what we do right? We bend and twist and play with our words so that they hit hard.


So..... Viva La Gangsta Rap. Cheers! LOL

[Mani Mula]

It being an oronym makes it grammatically correct Just C.



Look it up.


And Mani, Yeah true. I think knowing about language arts helps though, I mean I would have never known to start using oronyms otherwise. I'm the type of person that likes learning different ways to rap and use / twist words. But you're correct, the average fan hears a bar / concept like that and is not going to crack open a book to figure out what type of wordplay it is and if it's works both ways and even if they pronounced it correctly most times. Rap is full of slang and slant rhymes and otherwise "grammatical imperfections", But that's what we do right? We bend and twist and play with our words so that they hit hard.


So..... Viva La Gangsta Rap. Cheers! LOL

Glad we Can Agree

[J u s T C]

But we will
And we'll

Don't sound the same. There is an pronounced second W in we Will which can't be heard in We'll

I'm not english teacher but as far as I'm aware For it to be an oronym they have to sound the same.



Thats the point They both MEAN the same but they don't SOUND the same

[Skizzo]

We'll / Wheel.



Now, I'm no English professor either.... But I did get this cool little hooked on phonics book for christmas..... & i'm pretty sure We'll = We Will. And Wheel = We'll. Phonetically speaking.



Wheel, Brake n' Tire Crews
We'll Break Entire Crews



Tell me if i'm wrong though?

[Godbody]

Just C


We'll is a contraction of the word Will of course they won't sound the same

The same way aren't doesn't sound like 'are not' because its a contraction of are not. Its supposed to be simplified not sound the same

[J u s T C]

mY HEAD HURTS.

EDIT.

I'm going back to getting ready for the england game.

[Skizzo]

You're head only hurts because of all them damn wheels breaking your entire crews son.



That Nikka GodBody Tho.

[RULE]

and niggas wonder why i jus vote for maself..:high:

lmaooooooo

[ViTRiOL]

copy+paste from an earlier post + edit



thread\

In reference to the Shakespearean insult.

Flyting - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

This dude forgetting the origin of verbal jousting?

//thread

[Skizzo]

In other news, I just joined this site... Again. Soooo... I need some people In my chat to talk shit to when i'm online.



Uhm... I Like long walks on the beach... reading poetry... and playing twister in the dark naked.




Just Sayin.

[Babylon]

You're head only hurts because of all them damn wheels breaking your entire crews son.

Made me laugh so fucking hard for no reason at all.

+1

[Row]

co-sign this thread. just asked vit to breakdown his vote & he failed miserably resorting to calling me bitch-made & saying hes lost all respect for me

LMFAO

he on his high horse, ive done that. fairest vote in all the land, my ass.

[ViTRiOL]

Row on that backpedal too.

I've done full breakdowns for both of you yet you still deny it.

Bleu, how else can I say that Dono's delivery was better than yours? Other than that he had more conviction in his voice, more strength behind his punchlines and cleaner, more relevant set-ups?

Row, how else can I say that your wordplay is weak and superfluous? Other than that your sentence plays do not work both ways and the broken nature of your wordplay makes it pointless to use within a concept in the first place?


Both of you have had perfect expos but you jerking off all over your own bars with them earplugs in like moody teenagers.

You literally can't say shit.

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Bleu cracks me up.

He said that he "asked to breakdown my vote".

The actual messages:

Dono wasn't more aggressive than me :high:

Just take a damn vote, Bleu. He was overpowering, get over it.

And ur opinion has become null

So you won by a 6% margin. That doesn't mean my opinion is null, haha.

Did I say that's what makes your opinion null or are you legitimately mentally disabled?

You said that my opinion has just become null.

I imagine you were referring to your victory.

It's either that or you're backpedaling.

my nigga ur an idiot. ur opinion being null is exactly what it is. the reason why i think that ur opinion is null doesnt really matter.

Alright then Bleu, so you were backpedaling.

Call my opinion null and you call half of the battle voter's opinions null. So you don't care to explain it? I don't really give a shit to be honest but it really doesn't make sense.

By the way, EVERYONE says you're a crybaby. Everyone.

Have a nice flight on Bitchmade Airlines.

why explain ur shit vote when u explained ur shit vote for me? lmao.. yeah i do think most people that voted for me dont have a clue what they're talking about. you're in the same category as row who had dono winning because of 'theatricality'(Row).. xD u dont know shit about audio u can just admit it.

why did rupt an actual credible MC give it to me off of delivery then? as did most ppl. ur overseer illo said i killed dono.

i guarantee no1 flipped the donald duck bar the way i did.. but using disappear wordplay which has been done to death is alright.

word vit u the man, ur so right.

It's not my forté but I know a better delivery when I hear one.

His delivery was better and to be fair, his punches were a lot more original. That Donald Duck shit was played as played can be. You still had a good verse.

You're turning out to be one of those sore ass bitches that can't avoid getting butthurt at every bit of criticism. A lot of people are better battlers than you, just take it on the chin man. There's no shame in it.

My expo was on point, anything that you have a problem with is down to your own egotistical psyche. Everyone says it. You're a real bitch when it comes to taking criticism.

Erupt has had more down moments in terms of voting and dodgepot views than you've had hot dinners. He's a credible MC and a solid dude but that ONE example isn't going to help you none.

Final World is just as credible, but I don't need examples.

Remember that voting is still subjective and it invokes criticism and observation. Deal with it, why do you feel the need to prove yourself to me after every bit of judgement I throw your way? You're just losing my respect over and over again.

Unless this was a clear landslide, then your whiny bitch fits have no place here. Someone could've said they were voting for preference and you still would've moaned at them. Stop making a damn fool of yourself.

the thing is, ur typing paragraphs strongly defending urself. im just stating facts




Where in here are you asking me for a breakdown, Bleu?

All you chat is a bunch of arrogant nonsense so don't bullshit when there's proof on the table. Fucking dweeb.

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Oh and before Row jumps on Bleu's bandwagon, he was basically calling you an idiot too. You know why? Because you voted against him.

Your move, Bleu.

[ViTRiOL]

look at this fucking weirdo still typing paragraphs upon paragraphs. you have aspergers.. its okay i get it pal.

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i asked u on IM to back up your claims once u decided u couldn't handle PMs.

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btw buddy i thought u had no more time for me & it was the end of discussion? smh..

You got nothing of substance to say.

But I'm enjoying watching you make a dick of yourself.

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It's evident that you truly believe that any vote against you is an incorrect vote. You wrongly believe that you're superior to every opponent. That's called Dunning-Kruger Syndrome. I'd rather have Asperger's, to be honest.

[Godbody]

ViTRiOL is like one of those dolls you pull that repeats 1 of 5 phrases

This nigga says the same ridiculous shit and backs it up with the same bullshot logic every few posts. Say something we haven't heard ViTRiOL and actually make sense instead of gettin clowned in here lmao

[ViTRiOL]

It's funny how everyone in the chatbox has been calling both of you whiny fags. But look how happy you both are together, I can't spoil that...

[ILLoKWENT]

SMH @this entire thread.. vitty is simply one mans opinion..=one solitary vote.. why is niggas losin sleep over this ish... if you disagree with his vote. Simply pm him for a breakdown wit the what and why...and if you still disagree wit his logic, then simply TAKE IT WITH A GRAIN OF SALT and move the fuck on...

[The Dope Man]

SMH @this entire thread.. vitty is simply one mans opinion..=one solitary vote.. why is niggas losin sleep over this ish... if you disagree with his vote. Simply pm him for a breakdown wit the what and why...and if you still disagree wit his logic, then simply TAKE IT WITH A GRAIN OF SALT and move the fuck on...

^Fa real...

[Row]

It's funny how everyone in the chatbox has been calling both of you whiny fags. But look how happy you both are together, I can't spoil that...

funny how he questioned only your vote and no one else's. And you thought it was just me who found your votes dubious. one/

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SMH @this entire thread.. vitty is simply one mans opinion..=one solitary vote.. why is niggas losin sleep over this ish... if you disagree with his vote. Simply pm him for a breakdown wit the what and why...and if you still disagree wit his logic, then simply TAKE IT WITH A GRAIN OF SALT and move the fuck on...

nah its the fact that he's cocky for no damn reason, like he's nice wit it. Who gon' humble their self to some pompous hoe? Shit he in the club for us battlers and not for himself; being a fvc member is a responsibility, not some opportunity to show off dat title. if ppl have predicaments he should tend to em professionally, and mantain that professionalism despite what heat he may catch. he should be a lil more sympathetic and hop off his own dick. see him Keep wit the egotistical demeanor and watch more threads like this come to a theater near you.

but yea moving on/

[Hubert Cumberdale]

^It might have been easier to claim Vit's not nice with it had he not JUST won a major title.

[ILLoKWENT]

funny how he questioned only your vote and no one else's. And you thought it was just me who found your votes dubious. one/

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nah its the fact that he's cocky for no damn reason, like he's nice wit it. Who gon' humble their self to some pompous hoe? Shit he in the club for us battlers and not for himself; being a fvc member is a responsibility, not some opportunity to show off dat title. if ppl have predicaments he should tend to em professionally, and mantain that professionalism despite what heat he may catch. he should be a lil more sympathetic and hop off his own dick. see him Keep wit the egotistical demeanor and watch more threads like this come to a theater near you.

but yea moving on/

please give me an example of vitty going out of his way to be arrogant or egotistical on his own accord, when he wasnt being attacked or ganged up on for a few votes he dropped... and if there is an instance where this occured , then let @ Vitriol respond to the proof of allegation.at the moment i dont recall ever seeing vitty purposely insulting someone else for nothing..... and if he is , which i doubt, i definately dont condone arrogance..

[ViTRiOL]

funny how he questioned only your vote and no one else's. And you thought it was just me who found your votes dubious. one/[COLOR="Silver"]

Do you even read bro? He said that I'm in the same "category" as in regards to the vote. He was saying your vote was invalid too you fucking moron, haha. Ergo he's questioning your vote. Jesus Christ, the intelligence levels around here...

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please give me an example of vitty going out of his way to be arrogant or egotistical on his own accord, when he wasnt being attacked or ganged up on for a few votes he dropped... and if there is an instance where this occured , then let @ Vitriol respond to the proof of allegation.at the moment i dont recall ever seeing vitty purposely insulting someone else for nothing..... and if he is , which i doubt, i definately dont condone arrogance..

Hit the nail on the head, Illo. When I vote, I vote. Arrogance doesn't come into it. Row denies my fair vote because they directly criticise him and him saying that I'm on a "high horse" is a way of avoiding addressing the criticism. Just like everyone else.

The truth is, acting like this when they act out is hilarious. Look at how goddamn sensitive you are, perhaps it'll teach you to grow a backbone in the future. I've been around for a lot longer than you, slick.

being a fvc member is a responsibility, not some opportunity to show off dat title

This made me laugh considering I recently asked ILLoKWENT if he wanted to remove me due to my inactivity. VP probably going to stay the same though so watch out you squad of butthurt puppies: Bleu Godbody Row

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So now, the homework for you cunts is to find a vote of mine when I'm:

1) On a high horse

2) Arrogant

3) Voting just to "rock dat title"


GO!

[Óðinn]

3) Voting just to "rock dat title"

That title though... :high:

[Dean]

The FVC title is diarrhea green. I don't think that's a title too many people want lol.

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I remember back in the good ol days it use to be yellow.

[ViTRiOL]

The FVC title is diarrhea green. I don't think that's a title too many people want lol.

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I remember back in the good ol days it use to be yellow.

Right now, I just want to rock raw orange, know what I'm saying?

[Skizzo]

SMH @this entire thread.. vitty is simply one mans opinion..=one solitary vote.. why is niggas losin sleep over this ish... if you disagree with his vote. Simply pm him for a breakdown wit the what and why...and if you still disagree wit his logic, then simply TAKE IT WITH A GRAIN OF SALT and move the fuck on...



http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-gBOoWjU3wDI/UFdS9Y-9_wI/AAAAAAAADCQ/q-psML1GNqU/s1600/slow-clap-gif.gif

[Row]

ill pm you ILLoKWENT

[Godbody]

take deez nuts with a grain of salt

[Skizzo]

take deez nuts with a grain of salt


http://ionetheurbandaily.files.wordpress.com/2014/02/you-gonna-learn-today-kevin-hart-stand-up-gif.gif?w=435&h=202

[ViTRiOL]

take deez nuts with a grain of salt

You mean your dick?

[Godbody]

womp womp

[ViTRiOL]

this grown man who has such a life is back yet again typing persuasive essays? fuck your life, bro.

Probably just looks as such because your chubby fingers can't type faster than 25wpm.

Your voice denotes that you are fat. I don't know why but it does.

[ViTRiOL]

it looks as such cuz u type 5-10 sentences per post saying nothing.

3/10

[J u s T C]

but he's been averaging 7's and 8's!

oh wait, wrong guy.

[Godbody]

Damn vitriol 80 to 20% how u feel bout ur vote now b

Don't deny it

[ViTRiOL]

Damn vitriol 80 to 20% how u feel bout ur vote now b

Don't deny it

I now feel that you're a complete pussy.

[Lockhart]

...:D

[Dean]

You could have picked better threads to revive.

[Lockhart]

This thread, however, was hilarious.

[ViTRiOL]

Oh yeah, everyone getting mad at me. This shit gets me so turned on.

Thanks for the awesome pr0n link, -James-

[Lockhart]

Not a problem ViTRiOL

I'm going to go wheel break and tire crews.

[ViTRiOL]

Not a problem ViTRiOL

I'm going to go wheel break and tire crews.

Better get that win-tho/window.

[Lockhart]

Better get that win-tho/window.

Shiiiet I'm about to catch bodies on the net like hammocks in trees.

[Babylon]

Shiiiet I'm about to catch bodies on the net like hammocks in trees.

But ull get yur soul/sole stepped on when u see defeat/da feet

[Lockhart]

But ull get yur soul/sole stepped on when u see defeat/da feet

I brought your girl to my summer home in Devin cause she thinks my cock's big.
It's like I'm buying "halal poultry" the way I get that "chick-in cottage".

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^One of my favorite bars from the Bad Bars Battle that Marlo and Shuffle-T had.