View Full Version : SHEEP LORD (0-0) Vs Note (0-0) - (Note Wins 3-0)
Hubert Cumberdale
08-19-2013, 08:46 AM
This match up is part of The Inkwell PPV.
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Prelim Match Up
SHEEP LORD Vs noteRD
Topic: A Blast From The Past
Good Luck.
I felt that neither of these pieces did a great job at unfolding a story. I wasn't compelled to keep going in either verse. Both could use more concrete imagery and elements that drive a reader on. The first verse however I was having trouble finding many redeeming qualities from right down to rhyme which isn't "necessary" in poetry but this is a topical in on a hip hop website and I wasn't feeling it
So my W goes to NOTE
Dysfunctional
08-20-2013, 11:08 PM
Neither made a story like agonize said but i thought one was using better vocab and imagery while the other was rapping as if it was a hot track on a beat or something my W goes to Note
Denton
08-21-2013, 02:39 PM
Both didnt really put much effort in either verse. I really cant elaborate on much since Agonize speaks the truth about it. Matter of preference though, Vote goes to Note
Hubert Cumberdale
08-21-2013, 02:49 PM
Note Wins 3-0
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