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Hubert Cumberdale
08-19-2013, 08:46 AM
This match up is part of The Inkwell PPV.
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Prelim Match Up
SHEEP LORD Vs noteRD

Topic: A Blast From The Past

Good Luck.

Aggo
08-20-2013, 07:07 PM
I felt that neither of these pieces did a great job at unfolding a story. I wasn't compelled to keep going in either verse. Both could use more concrete imagery and elements that drive a reader on. The first verse however I was having trouble finding many redeeming qualities from right down to rhyme which isn't "necessary" in poetry but this is a topical in on a hip hop website and I wasn't feeling it

So my W goes to NOTE

Dysfunctional
08-20-2013, 11:08 PM
Neither made a story like agonize said but i thought one was using better vocab and imagery while the other was rapping as if it was a hot track on a beat or something my W goes to Note

Denton
08-21-2013, 02:39 PM
Both didnt really put much effort in either verse. I really cant elaborate on much since Agonize speaks the truth about it. Matter of preference though, Vote goes to Note

Hubert Cumberdale
08-21-2013, 02:49 PM
Note Wins 3-0

RULE
01-04-2020, 03:57 PM
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