WHITZ
08-08-2013, 03:54 PM
JUST LOOKING FOR FEEDBACK IF THIS SHOULD BE SCRAPPED,TOUCHED UP, OR DROPPED FOR THIS COMPETITION. THE HOOK EACH WORD IS SAID LIKE A SECOND APART. GOES WELL WITH THE BEAT.
HOOK
I HOPE YOU GOT WHAT YOU WAN TED
HOWS LIFE NOW THAT YOUR A STAR KID
PAPARAZI MADE YOU COCKY
YOU CANT DENY YOUR SO SLOPPY
VERSE 1
YOU KIDDING ME RIGHT, THIS KID IS A DIKE,
HE FIT IN A DYPE, HE AINT READY TO FIGHT
HES A FEATHERWEIGHT TYPE ON A SATERDAY NIGHT,
HES AS BAD AS THEY BITE IT SO HAPPENS HE WHITE
JUST A PRODUCT OF LIFE THEY SEEN PRODUCT TO PRICE
PUSHED THE NARCOTIC DEVICE NOWS HES A PRODUCT LIKE DICE
IT STARTED LIKE LICE.. A BORN STAR WHO STARTED HIS LIFE
YOU THINK HES IN CONTROL? ITS WHOEVER FATHER HIS RIGHTS
HE SHOULDNT HAVE DETACHED FROM HIS MOTHERS BREASTISIS
20 YEARS FROM NOW, I BET HE'LL CONFESS TO THIS
BEING FAKA THEN THOSE BARBIE DOLLS MADE OF PLASTIC
SOON THAT MARIJUANA IS GUNNA TURN INTO A GLASS STICK
I BET HIS SOUL TURNED DARKER THEN MOLLASES
A FUCKIN PUSSY WHO GAVE IT UP LIKE ASSES
BETTA WATCH OUT YOUR DICK MIGHT TURN TO ASHES
LOOKING MORE STUPID THEN THOSE PICS OF YOU WITH GLASSES
VERSE 2
DIDNT YOU DO YOUR HISTORY N CELEBS WHO WENT THROUGH MISERY
YOU CALLIN THIS A VICTORY THIS DONT MEAN SHIT TO ME
I GOT THE SKILL N KNOWLEDGE.. I CAN KILL A BEAT
BORN IN 1984 AND IM STILL A G
YOU LIKA NEW SCHOOL DROP OUT.. IM LIKE THAT OLD SCHOOL IN COP OUT
YOU LIKE THE NEW SCHOOL TECH RAP IM LIKA OLD SCHOOL DEATH TRAP
I PUT THAT CREATIVITY TO WORK
YOU LEFT YOUR MONKEY IN GERMANY N GOT THE WORLD SAYIN WATTA JERK
YOU PROLLY GAVE MILEY LESSONS ON HOW TO TWERK
N I AINT GOTTA SAY WHO GAVE YOU A SIP OF PURP
YOU JUSTA PURPRATRATOR,SURE ID PERFER A FAVOR
JUST GIMME A 10 MIL BEFORE THEY START MAKIN TERMINATORS
I KICK THE CURRENT DATA.. JUSTA BURNA HATA
YOU AINT NUTTIN GREATA N HOMIE YOU DONT DERSEVE THE PAPER
VERSE 3
NO WONDER YOU AINT WIT SELENA GOMEZ..
YOUR UNSATISFYING WHICH WOULD PROLLY MAKE ER GO LEZ
YOUA BITCH THATS WHY FLOYD GOTCHYOU TO HOLD HIS BELT
I BETCHYOU NOW BEING A STAR ONLY MAKES YOU HATE YOURSELF
SPITTING ON YA FANS YA YOU BETTA BELEIB IT
TRYING TO ACT TOUGH WHILE YOU LOOKING CONCEIDED
LIKE AN ILLUMIATI PUPPET IS HOW YOU BEIN TREATED
ONCE YOU WASHED UP YOU'LL BE CRYING, I DIDNT MEAN IT
YOU ALREADY TO FAR GONE.. HAVING SHOWS CANCEL OUT ON YOU
THATS BECUZ THE PEOPLE ARE STARTING TO HATE THE SOUND OF YOU
YOU JUSTA TEEN HEART THROB TIL THE DAY YOU TURN 32
N BY THEN YA MOM SHOULD HAVE YOU ONA 10 O'OCLOCK CURFUE
THATS EVEN IF YOU MAKE THAT FAR, YOU COULD BE ANOTHA STAR WHO DIES FROM HERION N DRUGS
PLANE CRASH, CAR CRASH OR SACRAFICIAL RITUALS
HOMIE YOU DECIDE STR8 UP NO SUBLIMINALS
HOOK
I HOPE YOU GOT WHAT YOU WAN TED
HOWS LIFE NOW THAT YOUR A STAR KID
PAPARAZI MADE YOU COCKY
YOU CANT DENY YOUR SO SLOPPY
VERSE 1
YOU KIDDING ME RIGHT, THIS KID IS A DIKE,
HE FIT IN A DYPE, HE AINT READY TO FIGHT
HES A FEATHERWEIGHT TYPE ON A SATERDAY NIGHT,
HES AS BAD AS THEY BITE IT SO HAPPENS HE WHITE
JUST A PRODUCT OF LIFE THEY SEEN PRODUCT TO PRICE
PUSHED THE NARCOTIC DEVICE NOWS HES A PRODUCT LIKE DICE
IT STARTED LIKE LICE.. A BORN STAR WHO STARTED HIS LIFE
YOU THINK HES IN CONTROL? ITS WHOEVER FATHER HIS RIGHTS
HE SHOULDNT HAVE DETACHED FROM HIS MOTHERS BREASTISIS
20 YEARS FROM NOW, I BET HE'LL CONFESS TO THIS
BEING FAKA THEN THOSE BARBIE DOLLS MADE OF PLASTIC
SOON THAT MARIJUANA IS GUNNA TURN INTO A GLASS STICK
I BET HIS SOUL TURNED DARKER THEN MOLLASES
A FUCKIN PUSSY WHO GAVE IT UP LIKE ASSES
BETTA WATCH OUT YOUR DICK MIGHT TURN TO ASHES
LOOKING MORE STUPID THEN THOSE PICS OF YOU WITH GLASSES
VERSE 2
DIDNT YOU DO YOUR HISTORY N CELEBS WHO WENT THROUGH MISERY
YOU CALLIN THIS A VICTORY THIS DONT MEAN SHIT TO ME
I GOT THE SKILL N KNOWLEDGE.. I CAN KILL A BEAT
BORN IN 1984 AND IM STILL A G
YOU LIKA NEW SCHOOL DROP OUT.. IM LIKE THAT OLD SCHOOL IN COP OUT
YOU LIKE THE NEW SCHOOL TECH RAP IM LIKA OLD SCHOOL DEATH TRAP
I PUT THAT CREATIVITY TO WORK
YOU LEFT YOUR MONKEY IN GERMANY N GOT THE WORLD SAYIN WATTA JERK
YOU PROLLY GAVE MILEY LESSONS ON HOW TO TWERK
N I AINT GOTTA SAY WHO GAVE YOU A SIP OF PURP
YOU JUSTA PURPRATRATOR,SURE ID PERFER A FAVOR
JUST GIMME A 10 MIL BEFORE THEY START MAKIN TERMINATORS
I KICK THE CURRENT DATA.. JUSTA BURNA HATA
YOU AINT NUTTIN GREATA N HOMIE YOU DONT DERSEVE THE PAPER
VERSE 3
NO WONDER YOU AINT WIT SELENA GOMEZ..
YOUR UNSATISFYING WHICH WOULD PROLLY MAKE ER GO LEZ
YOUA BITCH THATS WHY FLOYD GOTCHYOU TO HOLD HIS BELT
I BETCHYOU NOW BEING A STAR ONLY MAKES YOU HATE YOURSELF
SPITTING ON YA FANS YA YOU BETTA BELEIB IT
TRYING TO ACT TOUGH WHILE YOU LOOKING CONCEIDED
LIKE AN ILLUMIATI PUPPET IS HOW YOU BEIN TREATED
ONCE YOU WASHED UP YOU'LL BE CRYING, I DIDNT MEAN IT
YOU ALREADY TO FAR GONE.. HAVING SHOWS CANCEL OUT ON YOU
THATS BECUZ THE PEOPLE ARE STARTING TO HATE THE SOUND OF YOU
YOU JUSTA TEEN HEART THROB TIL THE DAY YOU TURN 32
N BY THEN YA MOM SHOULD HAVE YOU ONA 10 O'OCLOCK CURFUE
THATS EVEN IF YOU MAKE THAT FAR, YOU COULD BE ANOTHA STAR WHO DIES FROM HERION N DRUGS
PLANE CRASH, CAR CRASH OR SACRAFICIAL RITUALS
HOMIE YOU DECIDE STR8 UP NO SUBLIMINALS