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Hubert Cumberdale
08-05-2013, 05:32 AM
Streetz Da Hood Vs Violent Scripture


Rules
Verses are due Monday, August 12th.
1 Day Extensions may be available on request.
Verses must be 30 lines long.
Voting is 3-0 KO or First to 5.

Topic
(Each will pick their own topics)

Streetz Da Hood Violent Scripture

Streetz De Hood
08-05-2013, 08:55 AM
Check. Goodluck VS

Lockhart
08-10-2013, 10:00 AM
Check. Good luck Streetz.

Lockhart
08-11-2013, 02:54 PM
"Why Should I?"

Early on, you can say that it was easy at first.
Your smile was always pleasant, it was cheeky and smirked.
Your angelic features always had me repeating a verse.
So it's ironic that we had our first meeting at church.
When we started to be serious, I would open eyes and awake craving.
To be your soul's entity, the heart of your safe haven.
Us together? There was never a moment that's dull.
I found you open minded and made a home in your skull.
You loved me so dearly, you had your hope it was tall.
That was why I had invited you to go to the ball.
That was our night, yes the time it was our's.
You wanted me alone, nothing else, not even buying you flowers.
I was afraid to close my eyes, I'd make a blink and I'd miss it.
Then I started to notice there's a kink in the system.
I felt an underlying prescence, it would shrink and rip skin.
It came from your father, and I wouldn't ever think that it is him.
I noticed that day that we were treading the waters.
We would be better off if he was dead in his rocker.
He verbalized his angst with, "Why am I letting the daughter
even step and then cross words with this dreaded imposter!?"
From that day on, you've been silent and distant saying to your friends,
"There are more women dying to win him."
You wanting to see other people left me crying and wincing.
Almost to the point where you saw me lifeless from drinking.
20 years later after saying my goodbyes,
you had me pissing in laughter after praying I would find
the nice woman, the right moment.
My pride was great and I stood primed
to find you shaken and me mistaken.
You left me stating, "Why should I?"

Streetz De Hood
08-11-2013, 09:40 PM
Will be dropping tomorrow. Ive been tied up with work.

Streetz De Hood
08-12-2013, 05:14 PM
Violent Scripture I thought I'd have more free time at work than I actually did... have been working on it off n on throughout the day... but dont imagine myself sitting on this computer all evening after being in front of one all day lol...are you cool with giving me an extension? You can edit your work also if so. If not then thats fine too.

Lockhart
08-12-2013, 07:08 PM
I'm fine with the extension. I don't really want to work it and put my mind to it anymore... Shit's some personal stuff.

Hubert Cumberdale
08-12-2013, 07:23 PM
Streetz Da Hood, 1 day extension granted. Verse due Tuesday, 13th August.

Hubert Cumberdale
08-14-2013, 08:19 AM
Violent Scripture WINS BY NO SHOW