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AfterThought
05-23-2013, 06:13 PM
Lets Beef Track: Ring The Alarm (Ft. Punk & GRizzEAT) - By: AfterThought

Appreciated. :high:

X-Calibur
05-23-2013, 06:18 PM
Lmao at the start that shit was funny as fuck .....

First verse .... Flow on point good content in the verse quality is good .....

Chorus is it meant to sound like its coming threw a phone call ?

Verse two .... Yeh great quality some nice lyrics too good flow

So who spit what ????


Could of done with a third verse for me ....

Props tho ....

AfterThought
05-23-2013, 06:25 PM
Lmao at the start that shit was funny as fuck .....

First verse .... Flow on point good content in the verse quality is good .....

Chorus is it meant to sound like its coming threw a phone call ?

Verse two .... Yeh great quality some nice lyrics too good flow

So who spit what ????


Could of done with a third verse for me ....

Props tho ....

Yeah, chorus is meant to sound like that, and first verse = Grizz, second verse = AT.

X-Calibur
05-23-2013, 06:29 PM
Yeah, chorus is meant to sound like that, and first verse = Grizz, second verse = AT.



Ooo ight ma dude i rated it a 9 as i wasnt a fannof the chorus but when i went to rate it gave it a 0 if ya can delete it ill re-rate it for ya ....

Shit was good tho no doubt ... Props

Phonocide
05-24-2013, 05:10 AM
Good shit, AT. That track is dirrrty, fam. I'm not really feelin' the chorus too much either, but the beat is nice, and both verses were right on point, dope as fuck. I think the chorus could be made to work with some better production, but as it stands, I feel it isn't helpin' the quality of the rest of the track.

Respect,
'Preme

AfterThought
05-24-2013, 07:45 AM
Thanks for peepin fam.

GRizzEAT
05-24-2013, 03:53 PM
haha..

V3numb
05-24-2013, 04:00 PM
that shit right thur just made me wanna drop a track..

FreezyCT
05-26-2013, 08:52 AM
lol wait so punk didnt even get a verse?