Help Me Improve?

[Dysfunctional]

I want at some bigger names and am told im still basic can somebody help me out apparently i got the basics but they ARE basic any help?

[Duh Great Whyte]

just up your multi schemes and add more umph to your punchlines, your build ups are ight got some decent concepts connection, but just get more complex ya dig, think out side the box, all i gotta say, other than that you on the right path bro, keep battlin and you'll elevate, need any more in depth explanation, pm my inbox w a verse n i can give u pointers and such

[V3numb]

Moses .. what happened to that school thing..


Dave shelter this kid and put em to sleep with that chloroform son..

[Hubert Cumberdale]

^Already ahead of you :D. He's in ACs Academy to compete for a shot in Chloro. I've got the scene covered :D

[Dysfunctional]

Dave ya when is that happening i havent gotten an invite yet.

[Hubert Cumberdale]

I'll send the social group invites tomorrow, and then start it on Monday.

[Row]

leave that shitty ass crew

[Dysfunctional]

RoWW what shitty ass crew

[V3numb]

he means the only one your in atm..

[X-Calibur]

he means the only one your in atm..

Ouch ....

[CakedOut]

K.o.c wasn't a shitty as crew. Just a inactive 1.

[Dysfunctional]

K.o.c wasn't a shitty as crew. Just a inactive 1.

true dat

[Doomsday™]

Send 8 just expect a reply later, also ill keep it blind too.

Borat

[Erupt da Monsta]

Moses .. what happened to that school thing..


Dave shelter this kid and put em to sleep with that chloroform son..

Yo the school is comin back real soon yo, right now im mad busy but school will be in session in real soon no doubt..

[V3numb]

Yo the school is comin back real soon yo, right now im mad busy but school will be in session in real soon no doubt..

cool,cool, rookies'll be hyped

[Phil Banks]

dont do text.