ItzNDaSawce
03-21-2013, 09:09 AM
id rather see 4 8s than this brah..only reason why..ya story changes bout 4 times..line after line I see that u tried to connect concept to a punch..i see ur verse was typed as an open but forcing a 32 and hopeing its strong enuff for ur opponent will only end up with a vet takin his time(since this 32 will be here a while) and picking ur verse apart..ud have better ods with 4 8s and noobs snipeing them..
CLETUS KLUMP's UNDIES
FREAK'N SLUTS ON WEED
VEGAN LUST'N FA BEEF
PENIS CUMS IN YA SPEECH
SEMEN DUMP'D ON A BEACH..ect..need I say much more..this more like a cypher that u should've played with the rhyme scheme lil more..but nice ass attempt..jus wantedto point the real out there so u can focus on other thangs..
CLETUS KLUMP's UNDIES
FREAK'N SLUTS ON WEED
VEGAN LUST'N FA BEEF
PENIS CUMS IN YA SPEECH
SEMEN DUMP'D ON A BEACH..ect..need I say much more..this more like a cypher that u should've played with the rhyme scheme lil more..but nice ass attempt..jus wantedto point the real out there so u can focus on other thangs..