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IV
01-04-2013, 01:59 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IR-IP2tDEnQ

Like like comment share and all that, feedback appreciated

Phil Banks
01-04-2013, 02:02 PM
baron look like one of santa's happy helpers n shit

IV
01-04-2013, 02:11 PM
And yes I fell over drunk up the stairs and fucked my chin(s) up before anyone comments lmao.

Yeah Phil Banks he was suppose to, the little bastard rubbed his beard all over my hair as well

Phoenix
01-04-2013, 02:12 PM
Bodybag Verity


Good shit.

Phil Banks
01-04-2013, 02:17 PM
yeah my knock is you aint capitalize... you only going to get so far forgetting your writtens... think you should kept going some more on the 3rd verse... you had em laughing...gotta go for the kill shot... so IMO wasn't a bag... coz he was alright n ya'll both forgot shit.... you won but really coulda been a bitch an fucked him over

IV
01-04-2013, 02:24 PM
Need to start preparing and practicing, gotta get on DF for motivation to do the best I can I think, I like that smaller league but there were some proper dickheads there that day so just wanted to get it over with haha

GRizzEAT
01-04-2013, 02:24 PM
ur last couple lines fuked over tha whole battle, G'shiii V-baby. U need a stylist tho....lolz

IV
01-04-2013, 02:27 PM
Na it's all about Owls and leather in the UK right now Grizzle, it was fully raining outside so got soaked on the way too, fuck it, this footage should have got fucked like the last one lmao

IV
01-05-2013, 09:28 AM
Bumpin

METH_BARZ
01-05-2013, 09:54 AM
your bars are good but your delivery turns me off good shit though props

ViTRiOL
01-05-2013, 09:55 AM
You didn't flip his "nation of Africa" moment?

He seems like a nice guy but I reckon even those Armani blondes know that Africa isn't a nation, bwahahaha.

I enjoyed this muchly.

IV
01-05-2013, 10:17 AM
Lool Vitty I been asked to do a cypher for a music channel, n I need your help with something so I'll talk to you on chat about it later

Letum
01-05-2013, 10:24 AM
You did a slow it down??!! Your better than that V lol

IV
01-05-2013, 10:40 AM
Yeah a tongue in cheek one though, slow it downs aren't all bad anyway hahaha I did a huge one in my last battle but fucked it up

ViTRiOL
01-05-2013, 11:28 AM
Mate, I woulda fucking knocked out those arseholes talking throughout the whole thing.

AfterThought
01-05-2013, 11:50 AM
Verity You definitely got this. Only problem is, you always seem uninterested/bored when ya spittin lol, get rid of that & get some aggression & boooom, bodybags.

METH_BARZ
01-05-2013, 12:13 PM
^ yea thats the biggest problem I have when I listen bars are on point but it seems she ain't even into the battle lol

IV
01-05-2013, 12:22 PM
It's difficult finding a delivery style to match my bars and persona but I know I need to figure it out fast and I will, appreciate all the feedback